Hahaha oh dear... That last line really made me laugh!! Report Review
hihi, all this one-shot was simply hilarious! I liked it very much!
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this sounds like it has potential to be outlandish and entertainingly amusing(: how ever did you come up with a name such as milburga? anyhow, you have a lovely banner and the title caught me immediately. update soon! Report Review
Haha! I LOVE this! It's wonderful. It certainly made my day.
Milburga is a hilarious character. Report Review
I like this, except for the comma at the end. I think if you wanted to show that the story goes on, elipses (...) would probably look a little better.
Paloma Report Review
This was really good! I wish this wasn't a one shot, just so I can find out what happens next.
Brilliant job! Report Review
Hi! I'm Genevieve on TDA, and I saw the banner for this on there and loved it, so I had to read the story, and I love it too! It's funny, and Milburga's great, and I just love the ending. It'd be awesome if this has some sort of sequel.Author's Response: oh hi! Thank you ... I will remember to look you up on TDA :)
And an sequel is thought of, I might do one if I get a good idea and some time. I loved writing this too much to just let it go away, I would miss Milburga too much.
But really, thank you. Report Review
Oh my gosh. Haha. I was laughing so hard at the end. I love your writing and this idea was great. I wouldn't mind a sequel to this ;D Report Review
Oh my gosh. Haha. I was laughing so hard at the end. I love your writing and this idea was great. I wouldn't mind a sequel to this ;DAuthor's Response: thank you, thank you.
I actually have a sequel in mind, but there is nothing on paper just yet and I'll only do it if I find time for it.
-Marlene Report Review
I love this story! It's a cute little oneshot. I would of liked to see more of Remus though!! But really, it was cute and quirky and just perfect!!Author's Response: aw, thank you love. Yes, I agree that Remus should have played a bigger role, but it just didn't seem right (I cut out a scene with him).
-marlene Report Review
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