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Review #1, by AndrinaBlack Unexpected visions

22nd August 2010:
I liked this. I have always somehow thought that Professor Sprout could be married and I actually have an own story started where she is one of the main characters and it is intended that she would get together with Mr Sprout during that.

I think this was very cute. You made Pomona seem like she was in character. Of course we don't know her at that age, but I can imagine her like that; nice and dutiful and very likely a prefect and loving herbology of course. The description of when she found the mirror was also very good. I really got the feeling of how she was entranced by it. There were a couple of small typos somewhere in this, which I now forget what they were, but something that you will surely find yourself if you read it through.

Haha, so inside she knew already that she was in love with Sprout. Otherwise she wouldn't have seen him in the mirror. She must be quite shocked when she hears what the mirror does, if she did go and tell about it to the professor.

Author's Response: Thank you for your review, Annina! :) I haven't updated this story in so long, but your review made me start writing again.

JKR said that some of Hogwarts Professors are married, so I thought why not her? She seems nice enough to be married. ;) I'm glad you thought she was in character!

I'm off searching for those typos. I'm rubbish at finding them!


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Review #2, by lia_2390 Unexpected visions

18th July 2010:
Hi!

I must commend you for using Prof. Sprout. She's hardly written about but she's so sweet here! I really hope you don't abandon this one, you haven't introduced Jonathan yet and I'm rather excited about that. I also thought Pomona finding the Mirror of Erised was a nice touch...a massive *foreshadow* moment for us readers :)

Lia.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review. :) I like writing about minor characters because my imagination can go crazy about the details of their life. I have no intention of abandoning this story, but my muse is lacking when it comes to multi-chaptered stories... I'm trying to do my best. :)

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Review #3, by iloveblack Unexpected visions

30th October 2009:
Iím here to spread the love for HPFFSAD!

I really like this. Iíve never read a Pomona Sprout centered fic and to be honest it has never crossed my mind that íSproutí might not be her maiden name. Anyways, I like the whole beginning and the indepth description of the Mirror.

Well done!

Antje

Author's Response: Thank you very much :]

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Review #4, by Harry and Ginny Unexpected visions

17th September 2009:
great start 4 the 1st chapter. i must say this story is quite interesting so i look 4ward to read the next chapter. will u update soon please?^_^

10/10

Harry and Ginny

Author's Response: I'll update quite soon. I'm glad you like my story. :]

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Review #5, by lilausty Unexpected visions

17th September 2009:
great beginning to what I'm sure will be a great story! I thought your descriptions regarding her intense emotional swings were very well worded. You have got me intrigued about the pun lol, I'll probably now lie awake all night trying to figure it out :p!

good job!

Author's Response: Thank you very much. :] Please, don't lie awake all night, or I might feel guilty for your lack of sleep. :]

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