Nice story, glad to read.
a few errors ingrammer and spelling
but good. Report Review
So adorable! I don't know if you meant it to be or not but I had to 'aw' at the ending. Report Review
I like this! It was a little short, but I like it better that way. May I reccomend my Lily/Regulus one-shot? If you're interested it's called A Life Once Loved. I'm giving this story a eight out of ten Report Review
It was different, I have yet to read a story with Reg and Lily are talking in it. But some things didn't sit right with the characters, like Reg would think "mudblood" or something nasty and how dare Lily come stand next to him...Yes, he wasn't as mean and cold as his other family members, but his thoughts and actions were still controlled by what they said to him. So he would of been insulted by the simple fact that she was talking to him... Just what I think.
But it was cute all the same, poor Reg =[ Report Review
aah! love story my darling ;) love it! 10/10 Report Review
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