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Review #1, by jaisy I'm Not Him

6th April 2012:
this is AMAZING! precisely what i could imagine happening. well done on a fantastic story

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Review #2, by BKL8008 I'm Not Him

18th January 2010:
Very good capture of how this meeting could have happened. I wish something like this had happened similarly in canon.

Author's Response: Aww thx! I wish they had something like this to, but they don't! So i guess that leaves it to us fanfiction writers, eh? Thx again for the review!

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Review #3, by essenni I'm Not Him

14th December 2009:
The story has a good idea in it, but you could develop it more so it would work out really fine. A problem is that the whole story was mainly dialogue. It would help if you included more descriptions and depicted something through thoughts, not aloud. That would help to create the mood better. I am struggling myself with descriptions, but the story really reads better if there's more than dialogue. What I really missed was an introductory scene at the beginning. It felt rough when it started immediately with dialogue. I would also like to know what Snape thought while overhearing their conversation.
p.s. Spell "minute" right. I don't usually pick at spelling, but you've made a mistake in two places.

Author's Response: I'm not really sure how to respond... I guess I'll say thx for reading and reviewing and I'm sry you didn't like it. Umm... yeah.

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Review #4, by IvyGreen I'm Not Him

23rd September 2009:
Aww, that was sad, but I liked it. I could just be me being a Snape fan, but I felt really sad for him just now. I mean Harry has Sirius and Remus right now, Snape's got...well fangirls, but that's not the same thing! lol No, but I liked this. Good job!

Author's Response: Lol. Thx so much 4 reviewing! Ur my first review! Yay u! I know it was sad, I didn't mean to make it THAT sad, lol. It ended a lot differently than I pictured but I couldn't think of any other ending that would fit. Thx again for reviewing!

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