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Review #1, by loony_lovegood101 Neapolitan Ice-Cream and Sirius Black

2nd April 2012:
hey...i absoloutley love this story.and i have for a while. your writing is amazing...and on top of that i love sirius/OC i was wondering if you could write another one of them because this one is just so amazing!
keep being awesome!! till next time


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Review #2, by malfoyfan Neapolitan Ice-Cream and Sirius Black

23rd February 2010:
i thought it was really cute, but the ending wasn't my favorite. BUT I LOVED HOW SIRIUS WAS HIDING BEHIND THE TAPESTRY! THAT WAS FUNNY! :) hee hee hee!

Author's Response: Haha, thanks for the review(:
And trust, I'm feeling iffy about the ending as well, but I'm EXTREMELY TOO lazy to change it at the moment. x__x;
Sirius has probably done much more sillier things, but I haven't seen him inside of a tapestry lately, so why not? (x
Thanks again for the review love!(:

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Review #3, by I'm going to be quite honest here. Neapolitan Ice-Cream and Sirius Black

14th December 2009:
I'm sorry for a not so pretty review.

I couldn't even make it through the story. It was as cliche as the next story. Work on your writing style. You are terribly hard to follow. You've got a good idea going, but work on developing it more for next time.

Sorry again, but it's all about learning.

Author's Response: Oh, no I don't mind. It's all about pleasing the readers, which includes you of course. I'm sorry that the whole story seemed like a flop for you. |: I know that I have much to improve on and I'm glad that you were the one to give me the criticism I needed. I hope I don't disappoint again, but if I do, feel free to tell me. Thanks for reading, or trying to, though.

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Review #4, by shewhoshallnotbenamed Neapolitan Ice-Cream and Sirius Black

19th November 2009:
LOVE IT :) oh wait, this has to be 20 characters. there.

Author's Response: haha thank you, i think it's about 20 character's too (:
if you would like to read other stuff you can just look on my page! thanks for rating&reviewing!

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Review #5, by Meghna Neapolitan Ice-Cream and Sirius Black

1st October 2009:
I'd be happy to make you a banner :)

Just go to The DARK ARTS and go to the requesting arena (specific artist)

and form a new topic, and ask for PrincessTutu (me) :) I'd be happy to make you one. You have to reigster first! And be sure to fill out the form though!
Great story!

Look forward to it :)

Author's Response: OMG!(: really THANKS(: you'd be the first person to make me a BANNER!

thanks for liking my story and i already am registered! YAY!(:

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