Well seeing I’m a huge Harry Potter fan (obviously) and a huge Percy Jackson fan it makes perfect sense I had to read this. ;p It is a scary thought Kronos and Voldemort working together. Though it would make an epic tale. So I like the idea you have here.

I like the fact he said that those wizards on brooms were Hecate’s children, as that would be the most obvious thing for him to think and in my opinion it gave this story more dimension. It made it seem more real.

I also liked the comparison with Harry Potter, because when I was reading the books I thought the same. I mean they are both completely different characters but in that aspect they are the same. I like the idea of Firenze and Chiron being friends.

I really liked this far and I didn’t think it was clichéd at all, which is kinda difficult with these kind of stories. You did an excellent job.

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OMG! I ACTUALLY THOUGHT U ABANDONED THE STORY! I LOVE IT PLEASE DONT ABANDON IT!!

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OMG! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!! YOUR STORY IS THE ONLY ONE WITH CHANGES THAT I LIKE!!!

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OK... as a rule I NEVER read crossovers. I tried once, and it was actually painful...
But when I saw you had crossed two of my favorite series, I couldn't resist! And I'm glad I didn't!

You did a wonderful job here blending and bouncing between the two worlds. The fact that you made the Death Eaters visible to the muggles instead having the mist cover them was perfect. Percy's reactions were right on... as were Annabelle's Mr. D's and Chiron's! I felt that Harry's dialogue felt a bit off, but nothing drastic.

In the beginning I thought Paul was being too nice, considering he hates Percy... and that makes me suspicious! Lol. Did Percy just happen to catch him in an oddly good mood? Or is there more too it??

I can't wait to see what happens when the trio gets to New York! This is going to be epic ;)

As far as corrections I noticed this typo:

"I mere want what was taken from me long ago." -should be merely

And as I was reading I found there were several awkward sentences and a few punctuation problems. The story is great, but I think a quick look over by a beta would make reading it a little easier ;)

Can't wait to get to the next chapter!
Keep up the great work ;)

~Moon~

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You updated! :O:O
I nearly thought you abandoned the story! I really love this story because its one of the very few crossovers which are well-meshed and written together..
I liked this chapter.. I'm really eager to see what you have planned for the rest of the chaps..:)
I hope you update soon! Awesome writing as usual..a couple of spelling mistakes somewhere but good job:)
And I miss Percy! Please bring him back in the next chapter!:)

With loads of love,
NightStar

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Please write another chapter

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I like it. I think you shoukd put it were hogwart is helping chb
camp halfblood

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please continue this story. it it really good i hope you will cotinue this story. when can you update this story?

Author's Response: Hey! wow...people are still reviewing this...tell you what...give me 24hrs to update. :D Thanks to the review, thought! I really appreciate it!

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Dude! this is epic!
Like awesome!
I love the plot..I've searched for so many PJ/Hp crossover stories and none of them are as good as yours!
I seriously love this.. super interesting..
especially both the villains merging..Genius idea..:D

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This is really good. Keep it up.

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Can't wait to read more.

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It's getting really good. Will thay all make it?

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Love this story so far.

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This is really cool. Can't wait to find out happens next.

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one word and an abbreviation: UPDATE ASAP!

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Write more. Write more. Please please please please pleeease!

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love your story post soon

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I just relized, Percy Jackson has the same first name as the Weasley, Percy.

Anyway, I luv this story. Keep on writing!

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This is definitely one of the better crossovers I've read! Please update soon!

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This is awesome! A crossover between HP And PJ! Bloody Brilliant. can't wait to read more!

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Please, please, please, please, write more. I luv Harry Potter and Percy Jackson books. This story is the best. Keep writing, I'm waiting for more!

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Aww I'm out of chapters :/ post more soon please :) I love this story it combines two of my favorite books/movie(s)! You got all the characters personalities right (from what I can remember) can't wait for the next chapter :)

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You have done a great job getting the two stories together. I hope you keep updating on here. After all i spent a half hour searching for a Percy/Harry crossover story, don't want to have to search again.

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I love this fic so much! I think this is so well written and the way you have blended PJ with HP is fantastic! I really think you have kept in character as well! I hope you continue to update on here as well as on FF .com! I will be adding this fic to my favorites!

10/10

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UPDATE!
PLEASE!
IT'S AMAZING!

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