Wow. Although this is short, this packs so much of a punch! I seriously loved reading this. Seeing Victoire ill and Dominique being in the role of power despite being the younger sister and sometimes portrayed as the 'weaker' one was great to see.
The relationship between Victoire and Dom was very complex, but you put it across so simply. The fact that she referred to her sister by her name to create distance from what was inevitable was very clever and showed a real depth of human feeling - I bet many a person has done the same in their lifetime.
The way that Victoire died was so unexpected and shocking, but in a way was also satisfying as she was in pain. Although she was euthanised, it was fitting in a way. Dom and Teddy working together and also being together relationship wise is also unusual and another way of turning things on their head.
I seriously loved this. Well done! Report Review
Oh my goodness, I loved this! It left me speechless. It was eerie but filled with passion all the same. And the end, so chilling! I seriously enjoyed every moment of it. Like I said, left speechless, so I am sure this review is beyond unhelpful.
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whoa. uber-creepy ... twas well written and engaging, but still, creepy. Report Review
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