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Review #1, by spangles Prologue

15th December 2010:
Whoa! Now this is a story that needs to be continued. I loved how you summarized this and everything started in the library, it was so cute! I can't wait to see James' reaction to the baby, you've got to continue! And I'm curious to how your MC (We don't even know her name yet!) became an orphan. Continue? Pleaseee?

Author's Response: Don't worry, this is definitely something I plan to continue when I find the time to plan it all out properly. This is an idea I'm really excited to write, and I want to make sure I do it properly. As for James' reaction, and my MC's identity (and how she became orphaned), all will be revealed in time! I'll be sure to let you know when I start posting this again!

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Review #2, by moonymayhem Prologue

6th July 2010:
Yikes! She's preggers! My thoughts kept changing as I read this...at first I totally thought it was going to be one of those stories where the girl's just like longing obnoxiously after the boy the entire time, and believe me when I say I was very happy to discover it wasn't. Then I kept thinking to myself that I wish that you'd shown us the details of James and Veronica's growing relationship. But THEN they did the deed and of course...she's pregs! Aaaahhh I can't wait to see where it goes. I'm definitely looking forward to the next update :) Nicely done!!

Author's Response: OMG, I am so sorry I haven't replied to this yet! I actually replied ages ago, but something must have failed when I submitted it, because here your review is sitting on the unanswered page! So, very very sorry again, I haven't been leaving you hanging on purpose!!

I'm glad you mentioned that this isn't one of those stories where the girl pines after some guy only to discover he's liked her all along. I'm actually looking to do the complete opposite with this story - to chronicle to decline of a love affair rather than the rise of one. Thats why the events in this chapter seem rushed - why you don't get to see the details of their relationship growing. This is just setting things up for the story itself. Veronica's pregnancy will of course play a huge role in the story, but as for where all this is going, I'm keeping mum!

Thanks for the lovely review! I'm afraird there aren't going to be updates any time soon, but I hope when I'm able to continue on with it you will still be around to read it!


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Review #3, by HarrietHopkirk Prologue

11th January 2010:
Oh my god. A baby? I'm looking forward to it. This is a really cute chapter, beautifully written and, like I said, I'm looking forward to when you next update. It sets up for a really good story.

Update soon, please!

-HH

Author's Response: Hi! First, thanks for taking to time to R&R - my first review for this story!!

Yes, a baby. I admit I was a bit concerned that starting the story out with Veronica pregnant might turn some people off the story, what with so many pregnancy stories out there - especially Next-Gen ones. But this isn't your average Next-Gen pregnancy story. Atleast I hope not - I've got some twists planned that I haven't seen before, at any rate.

Unfortunatly, I won't be updating this in the very near future. I've put it on hiatus, and won't be writing more until I've gotten all the speed bumps ironed out. Hopefully it will be worth the wait!

Thanks again for the review!!


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