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Review #1, by LilyMilly 1

31st January 2010:
hei :)
i loved your stroy !
is there a sequel somewhere ?
ples say it is !

Author's Response: I apologize for the tardiness. As for a sequel, I'm afraid I don't have any plan for that but we'll see. I'm trying to re-write my current ongoing story so I guess I'll be concentrating on that first.

However, thank you for the comment. I'll see if I can pull something off :)


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Review #2, by F L A M M E 1

25th December 2009:
Wow, I've got to say that you've written quite a brilliant piece here! Really!

I loved how you portrayed Lily in such a way that she was written as a person with flaws. I always thought that Lily would always feel so overshadowed by all of her giant family and I think you've done an amazing job of capturing it. I feel so bad that this story has gotten only two reviews! I'm surprised, actually.

There were a few spelling/grammatical errors, but nothing too bad. Nothing that a once over wouldn't correct.

And wow, Scorpius' child? Oh, I dearly wish you could continue this story! There are so many twists and turns you could add that would make it brilliant, but alas, I wish for too many things. I also liked the ending, how it seemed that she felt a bit more optimistic about the child and was maybe willing to think about it.

It's one AM over on my end, so sadly, I don't think I have anything further to contribute.

Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year to you! (:


Sean.

Author's Response: Well, basically I was trying to protray something real. I personally think that insecurity is inevitable, as well as jealousy. Once you're surrounded by famous people, you couldn't help but try blending it, I think. But sometimes, it can't happen, right?

I wasn't exactly sure whether I've captured that feeling in this story right or not, but your review has certainly ensured me that, somewhat. Thank you for that. Originally, I intended to write more, alas my time didn't let me to. I even have an ongoing story which I'm about to re-write, yet I haven't had the chance yet. Besides, I'm more a reader than a writer. Furthermore, I should have provided more reviews to all the stories I reas, but then my time is limited once again until sometimes I forget to leave reviews. Lol. So I can't promise anything, but let's see...

But anyway, thank you for the wonderful review :D

Merry christmas and Happy New Year too! :)


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Review #3, by hallowsorhorcruxes 1

20th October 2009:
Wow- nice oneshot! I particularly liked your description of Lilly's insecurities. Being a Potter and a Weasley creates a mix of pressures to excel yet creates no surprise when expectations are met. Tricky, but nicely expressed through the natural flow of the story, something you deserve to be congratulated for creating! ^_^

Cheers-
Hallows

Author's Response: Well, I think everyone always feels insecure with themselves, no matter whether it's a minor or a major problem. I was trying to protray how Lily, as someone famous, deals with it.. Well, or something along the line. Hehe...

Thanks you for the review :)


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Review #4, by Daanana 1

9th October 2009:
Pretty intense. You should work on grammar and spelling - as you yourself mentioned. But I liked it. Deep subject - abortion - but you pulled it off. Last sentence was perfect; it will be done, soon. Summed it all.

Pretty decent piece. I liked it.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review!
I really am trying to work on that and I will probably ask my friend to beta-read it when she finally has the time. But for now, I'll try to minimalize it as much as possible, as I know how annoying it could be to read something which lack basic requirements.

In any case, I'll try my best on developing this story, if possible improving myself in every aspects as well :)


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