oh wow what a cliffie i can't wait to read what happens next.Author's Response: Thank you so much! :D I'm working on the next chapter right now, actually, at 10:52 pm where I live...stay tuned!
i like the way that the story is going and i can't wait to read more.Author's Response: Thank you, thank you, thank you! :D I love getting reviews like yours! Next chapter WIP Report Review
i shall keep reading!! lolAuthor's Response: Hahahaha that means soo much to me :) Thank you. Report Review
Oh - that's an interesting dynamic between Shealin and Darien. Will Remus allow such a romance to occur? I wonder...
PalomaAuthor's Response: In a nutshell:
More trouble a-brewing. Shealin will have to choose between two boys. Report Review
One thing I like about this story is that, although there are many original characters, they all fit-in well. None seem to be parachuted in to the story, which often happens in fan fiction.
Nice work there. Report Review
That was a tense moment between Sirius and Anne!
You wrote that dialogue well - I could really feel the frustration on both sides. Nice work.Author's Response: The story 'Past Returns' has a bit of Anne's background, and why she is using an alias. Her story is 'At the Beginning'. Report Review
Wow - that's an ominous final line! Report Review
I like the idea of a werewolf who is also a seer. It seems as though she might have both tremendous talent and instincts to offer.
Off to read more.
PalomaAuthor's Response: Thank you so much for the review! Shealin's got a lot of untapped talent, but I'm worried about it being too cliche...what do you think? Report Review
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