Hello!!

I think that this story is very nice! I like that you did a Rose/OC instead of a Rose/Scorpius. I also really enjoyed the fact that it wasn't Adrian who kissed her. I agree with "little angel" that this story definitely has some potential to be expanded into a short story! Great work :)

~LJ

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked the Rose/OC thing. I have to say I like Rose/Scor stories but how often is your first kiss with the person you end up with.


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Who is it? Sure isn't Scorpius... Hmm. *ponders thoughts*

Author's Response: haha, as of right now he's just a Slytherin OC in a one-shot.

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Well, this looks like the first review is mine! ^^. So I'm snagging it!


Gosh I really liked this One shot for the challange, (I am myself on that same challenge ^_^) and I have to admitt you surprised me. I was expecting to be a Rose/sco.. and apparently this is not the case.


You just let me wondering, what is the boy's name? You got me really curious with this part and, honestly, it would be interesting seein this One Shot becoming a larger Fic... the idea kind os has a lot of potential =D


10/10 =) really nice FF =)


cheers,

~Cat

Author's Response: thanks!
at first I thought about doing a Ro/Sco but thats what everyone would do so I decided to add a twist to it.

haha, that was the point so I'm gladd you want to know moree
I'm workingg on another story right now but I have to say I do have a lot of plot bunnies in my head about this one-shot

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