Aw. This made my heart warm. What a sweet proposal! Harry was so in character and you write him so well. I loved Ginny's reaction when he said that he was going to need her hand and how oblivious she was, very cute and I could totally see this happening! 10/10! Report Review
i really like how you have written it to be really peacefull and everything and when you read it you can really visulise that peacefull and calmnessi am now going to ready your next story the after the war story to if its as good as this one O:-) Report Review
Beautiful, you have really caught the magic moment on the proposing side of life. If you ever think about retiring from writing, please reconsider, you have a knack for the romantic side.Author's Response: You think so? Thanks very much! Report Review
That was the best type of proposal yet! No mess, no fuss, no sitting on one knee, and best of all, no "YES!!! I LOVVE YOU HARRY JAMES POTTER! OF COURSE I'LL MARRY YOU!!!" and Ginny flings herself at Harry and starts snogging him. Really good. :)Author's Response: I'm so honoured to hear my story is the 'best proposal yet'. You have no idea how much that means to me. I'm glad you enjoyed the no-fuss attitide to proposing; in my opinion, cliche stories are so tedious to read, so I worked extra-hard with this one to make sure they were both completely into character.
Thanks for your lovely review!
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Luv it :) So sweet :)Author's Response: Thank you! Report Review
lovely :) great job - you are a really talented writer! the imagery in the beginning was really well done :)Author's Response: Thanks. Your comments mean a lot to me :) Report Review
I could totally picture this whole ordeal happening as I read it and got really exited when Harry(My hero) propose to Ginny. This is really beautiful!...I absolutely love it!
^_^Author's Response: I'm really happy to hear you liked my story; thanks for taking the time to leave a review! Report Review
It was really sweet, I haven't ever read a fic like that, they're mostly always surrounded by family or something. This was nice though, 'cause by the time the war was over, they'd both been through enough that they wouldn't want anything that was too fussy. Good job :)Author's Response: Thanks, that means quite a bit to me. I think in my mind it was important that they were alone, because Harry isn't really someone who would want to make a big deal out of something, and having the whole family watching would do just that. Report Review
aweee, that was cute, i LOVED it!! :D Report Review
Nice One-shot. Well writtenAuthor's Response: Thank you :) Report Review
Wondeful story! I love your way with words! :)Author's Response: Thank you very much :) Report Review
cute, short and adorable good work :)Author's Response: Thank you very much! Report Review
hey nayence! great job! you definately have a way with words. i've always wished i could right like you...Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing...I never knew you liked my stories or my writing style, but there you go! I'm flattered lol Report Review
Love it :) a little bit cheesy, but there's nothing wrong with that. I can so imagine this happening with them.*romantic sigh* :)Author's Response: I know, it is pretty cheesy. I can imagine this happening too - that's why I wrote it lol. Thanks for commenting. Report Review
Erin this is a great way to tell the story of them gettting engaged! WELL DONE! :):):):):):)Author's Response: Thanks. I'm glad you like it. Report Review
I really liked this story! What's better than a fluffy Harry/Ginny fic? Very well written. Write lots more!Author's Response: Thanks so much. I love H/G too. Report Review
Wow, this is so cute! Definitely one of my favorite Fluff Harry/Ginny stories!! :):):) ~10/10~Author's Response: Thank you so much! Report Review
What a little gem!! Your story I mean. :)
This was wonderfully gorgeous, so sweet and both of them were completely in character. It was a beautiful moment, and so simple, which is how I imagine Harry would want it to be.
Your writing style flowed and was consistent, with great use of description and imagery that really set the scene. :) One thing I would suggest is to maybe link some of your sentences together, or make them longer. Some of them at the beginning are a little short, which makes them sound abrupt.
eg. It was twilight. Harry Potter and Ginny Weasley were sitting together in a clearing. The air was damp, the weather was cold, and the two of them sat close together for warmth.
If you linked the first two sentences together it would flow a lot more, and really fit with the relaxed, beautiful atmosphere that I sensed you wanted to achieve (correct me if I'm wrong! :D)
Apart from that tiny thing, I have no other criticisms, because I loved this story! It really put a smile on my face. :)
9/10Author's Response: Thanks so much! This is the nicest comment I've had on this story so far, and thanks for the advice on the sentence-joining. Report Review
loved it super cute, really, if you know the characters of HArry and Ginny well, then when you write their stories you can just see how much they love each other, bloody brilliantAuthor's Response: Thanks so much! It means a lot. Report Review
Cute! Fluffy, Harry and Ginny goodness. How I love fluffy, Harry and Ginny goodness. Great job! ~writergirl8
10.10Author's Response: Thanks so much! Report Review
aww they are so cute together and the proposal was sweet. great fic u have here.^_^
Harry and GinnyAuthor's Response: Thanks so much! Report Review
This is really good - I could nearly feel the warmth from the fire! I know you said they were in a clearing but I pictured it on a beach for some reason, my crazy imagination I guess.
This was really sweet and beautifully written, please keep your stories coming!!Author's Response: Ha, LOL. Nah, I wrote it in a clearing to show how down-to-earth they are. I kind of based it on my dream date, cause I love camping and stuff. Thanks for your review, I really appreciate it. Report Review
Not bad for your first, what could you do with a longer story?Author's Response: Hmmm, good question. I tried to make the story longer but wasn't very successful... Report Review
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