This was a great start! I'm definitely intrigued by Rebecca and Dobby was done perfectly. You gave us enough to feel a connection to the character yet, you left enough mystery in him for us to continue. The little extra touches here were great. The look to the ceiling was especially good, but things like the name Dobby and throwing in the Sword of Gryffindor sparked interest as well. I can't wait to read the next chapter. Well done!Author's Response: Wow, thank you so very much. I would ask you, as you are reading, please don't give up on it because it really picks up in the later chapters. This story has been completed for a while now and this is the first review I've received on it so thank you!!! Report Review
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