Hi just a question, when do you see yourself adding a few more chapters. It has been sometime since the last chapter in fact it has been sometime since anybody has pasted a new chapter. The storyline is one of the best and I have read it a number of times. Keep up the good woke

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love the story but write more or i remove from my list

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if ur battery is new then its your laptop cord that's old. sometimes its the cord instead of the battery. if not then call into a computer store and ask questions about it. Good Luck with your laptop! Keep up the good work on the story =D

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really good, but don't you think its too much of harry's extra powerful magic.
Can't wait for up-coming chapters.

Author's Response: no not really. i wanted him to have the big influx of power now the horcrux within him is destroyed.

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I just love your this story and I was hoping to find out when your next chapter will be coming out. I want to keep reading!

Author's Response: hopefully i will get another chapter up soon

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Wayne,
I did enjoy very much this chapter. I'm sorry for your computer woes. I hope you get it fixed, PDQ. Harry's magic is awesome.
FoM

Author's Response: the computer woes where a pain in the ar#&

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Great to see another chapter. I've been following this story for awhile and really like it! :)

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I'm so glad you updated! I love your story! I can't help smiling when I read it! 10/10

Author's Response: thank you very much.. i really want to keep updating this story but its hard going.. i have never written before and find it difficult sometimes, even with me have chapter guidelines for myself

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I love your story! It isn't like the other ones when some crazy other something happens. This story is strong, credible, and real. I hope you post the next chapter soon! How many chapters do you think you will have?

Author's Response: i have read many fanfictions and i wanted to be different with my story

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Wayne,
What a wonderful chapter. You really loaded it with many of the things we all wonder about. I can't believe it took Harry a year to apologise to the Goblins. When the amount of recompense was announced, it was a big hint as to what awaited deep in the bowels of Gringotts. I loved that his Great-Grandparents portraits were present, but where are his Grandparents? At least through them he can learn more about his Wizard family. I'm betting there's property out there too. Perhaps thats where other portraits are?
Now about his personal RoR, Outstanding. I do have to wonder just what he'll use it for? That he wants to show it first to Ginny gives me some good thoughts. I'll wait for you to reveal. Please don't delay the next update.
FoM

Author's Response: i thought of a few things that harry should, would do with the RoR. the main one wont be for a few years when his children are born. i chose his great-grandparents because a lot of fanfictions use grandparents.

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have already reviewed this chapter

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noted a couple of spelling errors, but excellent chapter

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how long was sirius in azkaban for? i think it was from the disappearance of peter until harrys 3rd year at hogwarts so 13 years... wow thats 130,000 galleons!

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thats a lot of galleons for the boys!

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aww baby house elves, i'm glad that harry has insisted they are free elves

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poor old kreacher :-(

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love the idea of a snitch bleep test

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awww i wanted to know what harry's other presents were... thats because i am so very nosy.

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really not liking the part where Ginny slapped Harry, i don't think she would ever have done that. just my opinion though.

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didnt particularly enjoy this chapter

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not as emotionally charged as it could have been :-(

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short but sweet, a bit like my review!

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Finally! A new chapter :) been way to long! But great chapter though

Author's Response: i should be writing more now that my course has finished. sorry that they take a long time between listing

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I don't think I really stopped smiling through that whole chapter. You are such a good writer. I was so happy when you updated. The only problem I had with it was what Ginny said before the match, I don't think she'd be asking her team to play mean, unfair, and I really don't think she'd invite a penalty. But I still really liked it.

Author's Response: i know. ginny wanted to finish with the record. a minor penalty isnt nothing when you could get another 2-300 points and the record.

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Again, another chapter I left unreviewed. It was such a good one too. It had all the elements I want to read about in the early chapters of this storyline.
Thanks
FoM

Author's Response: thanks again

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