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Review #1, by nott theodore Fractured Eclipse

10th July 2014:
Wow. This was a truly spectacular one-shot, especially considering it was written for the every word counts challenge. I can't believe how much you managed to convey in that short amount of words! Your banner was what pulled me in at the beginning - it's stunning - and the summary intrigued me too. I'm in awe right now.

The description in this piece was incredible. From the very first sentence I was amazed with the imagery that you employed and I think it shows off how talented you clearly are. I loved it.

My favourite thing about this was the fact that you hid the characters until the end - it didn't say it was Ginny so when I found out that it was, I was really surprised. I'm glad you chose to portray something other than the happy, fluffy side of post-war Ginny; the anguish and mental suffering she's experiencing are troubling but realistic. It's nice to see Harry is there for her, but I can only hope that he will always be there for her, contrary to what she believes!

Really beautiful! If I get a chance to read some more of your work I'll definitely be back!

Sian :)
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Review #2, by slytherinchica08 Fractured Eclipse

16th January 2013:
I haven't even made it all the way through the oneshot yet and I just have to say I love the description and word usage! The way you said cloud-encased moon and spindly limbs was just amazing. They are things that not all authors think to really describe in such a way but it has really added to your chapter and really stood out to me. Oh wow! When I found out that this was Ginny it just brought this oneshot to a whole new level! I'm in awe at how you wrote this and the character choices as well! Its so amazing to see Ginny this way and so original too, or at least to me it is! I've never really read much in the horror/dark category but let me tell you that this is amazing! I am completely blown away by this oneshot! The ending was perfect it still left me wondering more but was also very final too. A very enjoyable read! Great Job!

~Slytherinchica08~

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Review #3, by blackthoughtsredwriting Fractured Eclipse

30th December 2009:
Wow this is a very good story. I'm glad I found this on here. A little short, but just the revelation that it was Ginny and she's married to Harry gave me quite a shock. Anyways. I like it so much, I'm putting it in my favorites =] 10/10

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Review #4, by hirschy Fractured Eclipse

11th November 2009:
Oh, I love this! :D
It remind me of 'I am the cheese', only this is so much better ^_^
10/10!

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Review #5, by daisychain1 Fractured Eclipse

22nd September 2009:
oh wow! i love it, really well described! i love this line = As every day passes, my subconscious continues its destructive seduction. It was really good - i liked that it was a quick read :) and i love the banner- i saw it when i was looking for a banner for one of my stories at TDA and i was like "its really interesting!" it really suits this story though! great job!

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