Reading Reviews for Fractured Eclipse
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Review #1, by slytherinchica08 Fractured Eclipse

16th January 2013:
I haven't even made it all the way through the oneshot yet and I just have to say I love the description and word usage! The way you said cloud-encased moon and spindly limbs was just amazing. They are things that not all authors think to really describe in such a way but it has really added to your chapter and really stood out to me. Oh wow! When I found out that this was Ginny it just brought this oneshot to a whole new level! I'm in awe at how you wrote this and the character choices as well! Its so amazing to see Ginny this way and so original too, or at least to me it is! I've never really read much in the horror/dark category but let me tell you that this is amazing! I am completely blown away by this oneshot! The ending was perfect it still left me wondering more but was also very final too. A very enjoyable read! Great Job!


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Review #2, by blackthoughtsredwriting Fractured Eclipse

30th December 2009:
Wow this is a very good story. I'm glad I found this on here. A little short, but just the revelation that it was Ginny and she's married to Harry gave me quite a shock. Anyways. I like it so much, I'm putting it in my favorites =] 10/10

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Review #3, by hirschy Fractured Eclipse

11th November 2009:
Oh, I love this! :D
It remind me of 'I am the cheese', only this is so much better ^_^

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Review #4, by daisychain1 Fractured Eclipse

22nd September 2009:
oh wow! i love it, really well described! i love this line = As every day passes, my subconscious continues its destructive seduction. It was really good - i liked that it was a quick read :) and i love the banner- i saw it when i was looking for a banner for one of my stories at TDA and i was like "its really interesting!" it really suits this story though! great job!

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