I really enjoyed this, it was so sad and I really liked they way that you wrote it.
Poor Sirius :-( I just want to hug him. A great one shot. Report Review
Is this AU? Not to be a canon-freak, but Sirius gets taken to Azkaban right after he "kills" Pettigrew. And he goes out laughing.
Other than that, you've done a fantastic job with this. The characters' emotions are obvious, especially Sirius' blind desparation. I think that Moony's reaction is a bit off, though. At least the way I picture Moony - he would want to hear what Sirius had to say. He would be trying to cling on to any chance there was that Sirius hadn't killed James.
I'd like to read more about this... That's the problem with me and oneshots - I can't stand being left hanging. But anyway, if you ever feel like opening this up into a short story or something, drop me a PM on the forums or something. :)
Thanks for a great read! Ta ta! Report Review
that was, So Emotional. A Tiny Bit shocking towards the end, but really emotional.
Who would of thought Sirus and Remus could be an item?
Amazing as always Ande! x Frizzy Report Review
omgomgomg; that was .. incredible o; Really, an amazing siremus one-shot! Like the person below me, I don't think i looked away once. Stick with me, its half 6 in the morning and im stupid when im tired :L Just, wow :D! I'm putting this into my favorites. Report Review
Oh goodness, that was lovely! I was drawn to the screen the entire time! I don't think I ever looked away. The dialog was just so... captivating! I loved every moment of it. And the kiss was so original, yet totally believable. Great job. :) Report Review
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