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Review #1, by bee The Tip of the Iceberg

30th September 2012:
Wow another so quickly! I enjoyed it just as much, it's so brilliant! Much love xx

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Review #2, by bee Chase

30th September 2012:
I'm so impressed with this story! From the first chapter until now it has 100% held my attention and the writing was wonderful as well. I enjoyed the pacing of it and can't wait to see it continue :) So good, honestly, a new favorite!

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Review #3, by lucy The Big Bang Theory

20th December 2009:
SO AWESOME!
hope you plan to continue it!1

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Review #4, by brittish The Big Bang Theory

26th September 2009:
This is a really interesting beginning. I have to say the title drew me in.

The list of names was a bit confusing? I think you may need to explain them a bit more and limit them to the characters that are mentioned in the chapter. I also think the chapter was a little short considering the names and the definitions at the beginning.

You might think of doing the definitions of fate, destiny, and kismet at the beginning of different chapters. Like a new word that ties in for every chapter. That would be a neat idea.

Otherwise, I really enjoyed the story. I was skeptical at first because I usually don't enjoy fanfics that start when the characters are young unless they're really well written and yours are.

Congratulations, I'll be waiting for you're next chapter update!
Ciao,
Brittish

Author's Response: Thanks for the great review! I took your advice and changed the chapter :) And don't worry, they'll only be young in the first two chapters! Read the new one and tell me what you think!

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