So sweet! I have always been aware that she noticed him at Hogwarts, but I never really thought that maybe he noticed her, too. Well, maybe the word “notice” isn’t the best choice. After all, who wouldn’t notice a Veela. I just never thought of them actually talking right then. I just thought that maybe they first officially met at the bank. The idea was really good, though! I especially liked the using of the French lines. Recently, I’m really in love with French. Promised myself I will get on learning it soon enough. Report Review
J'adore le francais!!! Since I'm from the states, the only french speaking place I've ever been to is Quebec!! You really handled their relationship well, too. This is my first Bill/Fleur story, and I really like it. Good job!! 10/10 Report Review
This is the one you sent me in the inbox, right? I read it again and yes, I think I love it even more now. It's so cute. Fleur is more timid than she is in the books, but I like the way you write her. I loved her interior monologue and the french bits. And I thought Bill was really cute, too. He was so nice and charming. I love the way you wrote this :)
Anyways, great, as always (even if you don't believe me when I tell you it is). You should write more Bill/Fleur, I loved it. Lots. Report Review
AW!!! that was so cute!!! i love it! *hands you a brownie* Report Review
Aww, this was so sweet! Wonderfully fluffy and a really enjoyable read :)
I really liked your characterisation of Fleur and also how you wrote her speech - when her accent is done badly it can be a complete disaster and practically impossible to read, so great job with avoiding that :D My only criticism with her is that she seemed slightly less self-confident than she appears in the books, especially as she was surprised that Bill seemed to be attracted to her - she is part Veela, after all, and so would probably be used to this kind of attention from men.
Gabrielle was really adorable, as well! I loved her. The part with her checking Harry out was really funny ;) Bill was also brilliant. I loved it when he mispronounced her name! It made me smile, and seemed realistic, as well - French can be really hard to get right...
Anyway, lovely little one-shot! Great job :D 8/10. Report Review
aw!! this is amazingly cute. i can't say i've ever read this pairing before, but i loved it! and even though i didn't undestand the french bits, i loved how you've included them. it just makes it seem more fleur.
and its so sweet how they were both secretly (but apparently not subtley) staring at each other across the room. so many parts of this just made me smile! especially the ending.
and of course the line "Why you're even more beautiful now than I thought you were when I first saw you". just awww!!
you've most definately appeased my inner romantic! Report Review
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