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Review #1, by stoirmeacha Top Tower, Top Thought

16th September 2009:
I really liked this: I thought the dialogue was really good and flowed well as it would between two friends of that age of the opposite sex. I liked your use of imagery and I thought your use of imagery showed a natural ability with words. I'm really glad this was a one-shot - not because it was bad, but because it stood so well on its own; it had a definite sense of balance and worked really well.

One thing I did think though is that you might want to have a beta run through this - I noticed a couple of typos:
"Leave her alone, because she clearly /camp/ up to here to be alone." - came.
"she said very matter-/o/-factly" - of.
"I booked it my bed" - well, I thought this was one. I don't have a clue what it means, anyway ;)

Overall, I thought this was really, really good, and I really enjoyed it - I'm picky about what I read these days. 9.5/10

Emma

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Review #2, by spam_up_sam Top Tower, Top Thought

16th September 2009:
Aww that was nice =]
Very sweet actually, I enjoyed reading it
Well done
spam_up_sam

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