Insolent - Showing a rude or arrogant lack of respect.
I LOVE this story :D Report Review
sounds like an interesting story... and a fun one :) Report Review
Are you gonna finish this story or should we just guess how it ends? Report Review
Haha I like the beginning of this story! Its pretty damn funny. I love Luna Report Review
Luna is in Ravenclaw I believe, not Gryffindor.
Other than that, not bad. Report Review
great start 4 the 1st chapter however i want to point out that u wrote that Luna was from Gryffindor when she was from Ravenclaw. example: "he inched closer to the petite-framed Gryffindor." when it should be "he inched closer to the petite-framed Ravenclaw." will u update soon please?^_^
Harry and Ginny Report Review
What an unusual pairing. Kudos to you for making this work.
This story could stand alone as a one-shot, but I really hope you're going to continue with it.
PalomaAuthor's Response: Hello everyone, to answer a few things:
Everyone who corrected the Gryffindor mistake: Thank you, I feel really stupid for missing that. I've changed it and I'm waiting for it to correct.
Everyone who liked the story: Thank you so much! I'm so appreciative!
Everyone who wants to know if it will continue: I'm not sure, myself. If I feel the inspiration to, than I will write more.
Once again, thank you for the kind words.
-Lunatrixx Report Review
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