Reading Reviews for Toothpaste and Marmalade
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Review #1, by PEMDAS The Beginning of Something Entirely Different

9th October 2004:
Hmmm...good story, but it could use just a LITTLE bit of work. nevertheless, very good! I'd say 10, but it's either my computer or the website that got rid of anything that has to do with stars or ratings!!! Any idea what's happening?

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Review #2, by draconigena The Beginning of Something Entirely Different

7th March 2004:
Yay Daniella... good story... lol like i said before

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