Wow!
It made me cry :'(
The flashbacks were really good! :D
Nice story! :)
10/10

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Hooray. Rosie's amaazing. So strong!

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LOVED IT. (:

It drew me in pretty quickly for a one shot. ;)
I usually don't like them, but I loved this one.

Love the song.
Love the flashbacks (I always love flashbacks).
Love the... everything?

Good job. (:

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This is really great. I really enjoyed reading it.

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I really enjoyed the story. Love all things Rose and Sorpious. It broke my heart . :)

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Oh my gosh! I loved this. You almost made my cry, both because it was so sad and because it was to goddamn beautiful!

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i love songfics, and i have to say, this is one of my favourites.
i am also writing one. please read it, and tell me what you think.'x

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This was beautiful
I love the whole 'Scorpius sucks' image - love isn't always ladida :)
Perfect
10/10

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Hi it's elisalinguine_x from the forums!

I really, really loved this one-shot. I liked how you took the quote and actually wrote out a one-shot by interpreting the meaning of the quote perfectly. I absolutely adored it! Rose and Scorpius' relationship looked real and I felt as if I could feel Rose' emotions myself as I read it.

And I love the song you chose too, the lyrics are really beautiful and I think they fit the quote well too. I love Taylor Swift, all her songs are just lovely :)

I saw a few mistakes, but nothing big:

'She shut her suitcase and zipped it shut' - you should re-phrase that as you say 'shut' twice. Maybe put 'closed' first and keep the second 'shut'

'I care, Scorpius." She hissed.' - whenever you have she said, she hissed, she (something) you should close the quote with a comma instead of a full stop. Just check over and make sure you edit all those parts where you've used a full stop :)

Other than that I didn't find any faults with it.

The plot is very nice and I liked how you incorporated flashbacks instead of writing massive paragraphs describing the events of how their relationship broke.

Overall it was a great one-shot. I'm adding it to my favourites :D, I loved it that much!

Thanks for applying to my challenge and I hope you have fun writing this one-shot. 10/10
Elisa x

Author's Response: Oh, you have no idea how relieved I am that you liked it! ^^, I was honestly so unsure of what the quote meant at first, and then not sure if I should write another break-up one-shot, but I was really happy with the result in the end. I did, actually, notice the "shut" mishap once it had been validated, but I'll get right on fixing it now. Thanks again for the lovely review! :)

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this was very good i liked it a lot :)) Taylor Swift is one of my favorite artists and Rose/Scorpius is my all time fav ship so this was like an awesome package haha :PP keep writing your awesome haha :DD

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Love that quote. Great use of a great song, too.

Well done.

Paloma

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