You did great. This is 100% perfect. All the characters are themselves, it's a lovely story, and your descriptions are perfect. This is defiantly a favorite.

Author's Response: thank you so much!! a review like this means more than the world to me! i really really really appreciate your will to provide me with feedback, and honesty for that matter. have a great day! (:

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you did really well, loved the story

Author's Response: thank you so much. i am incredibly pleased to see that you enjoyed this.

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Your first! It sounds like you have been writing for ages! It is really good. Great idea, James would so do that!
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HPB

Author's Response: thank you so much for the lovely review. hopefully i will take on a few more Marauder fics in the near future. i had a blast writing this one. thanks again.

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that was cute and sweet. good job.

Author's Response: thank you so much for the lovely review. i am so glad that you think so!

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aww! this is really sweet :) i especially love the part with them at dinner. it's the awkward-cuteness you'd expect of lily and james at first. I also adore James' reaction! his doubt and confusion really is just hilarious. awesome one-shot!!

Author's Response: awww, thanks! i was hoping the cuteness of it all would shine through. thanks for the lovely review!

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