It was... dramatic.
And I hate drama. A little bit here and there is all good, but it's when people start calling each other 'love,' and 'my love.' 'Darling,' in the right circumstances, can be excepted once or twice as long as they are far apart, but I gag when people call each other 'my love,' or any other variant of it.
Otherwise, though, this fanfic was good :)

Author's Response: thank you for the review. it was meant to be dramatic, but thank you for your opinion.
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this is so sad..!! i feel so sorry for hermione, but atleast her sons were safe..?? is there a sequel..?? it would be sooo awsome if there was..!! This story is really good..!!

Author's Response: thank you for your review. i tried writing a sequal but i couldnt finish it so im not going to post it.
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That was very very sad :(. I thought it was very good but it could of used more discritive words and more detail, watch out for capitalazation and punctuation. i hope yo have found this useful

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Your story was good, only with the exception that i felt like there should have been more to the story than just this one chapter...other than that it was really good. Great job with details.

Author's Response: thanks i didn't have time to write a full story, coz of my exams but the more i think about it i think i should write a longer story, maybe a sequal.
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