I really like that you are telling this story. There are only hints of it in the novels, so it's wide open for you to tell your own version of the story.
You're right that this was a dark chapter, but it really needed to be, considering it's the beginning of the first war. This has great potential - I hope you update soon.
PalomaAuthor's Response: Oh goodness--updating soon. Major fail on that one, huh? Well, Chapter Two should be up shortly, so at least that's good news. Report Review
that was great !
i cant wait for more.Author's Response: Unfortunately, at my rate, you will have to wait. I promise I'll try to get better! Thanks for reading! Report Review
:P Ohh I like it --> even if it wasn't about the marauders. It is really good so far ;P I hope to see you continue, hehe 'dark' :P It's GREAT...yea..
Hippy -Author's Response: It'll only get darker. (Well, after some sillyness first.) I can't wait for those chapters--it'll be fun to practice writing the edgy scenes that await! Report Review
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