That is really good. I really like the relationship between april and al. It's very realistic. The only thing I can say for criticism is that maybe she's realizing that she likes al a bit too fast? But it's fine really. It's great so far and you'd better update soon because otherwise I'm going to die from curiOsity.
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When are you going to update-- I've been looking everyday for an update and still nothing. if you're not going to continue please tell me lol thanks!
Amazing story and amazing plot idea---I love these types of stories but they are usually hard to come by. So thank you for letting me read this. Keep up the good work!
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I really, really like this chapter, please update soon! Report Review
PLEASE update soon !!! ^^
i loved it !!! Report Review
i ADORE this!
i already love april and albus (james seems like a bit of a tosser at the moment), and this plot line is awesome.
keep it up, i cant wait for more!! Report Review
i really enjoyed this chapter :)
please update soon! Report Review
I did enjoy reading this! I like the plot. Well as much as we know of it so far ;) Can't wait to read more about how this plays out. I love the stories where someone thinks they fancy someone who is "unattainable" but the one they really want is right in front of them :) Precious. Hmm well I got a hint that maybe Al likes April already but I really can't tell from just one chapter. So I guess that means you should update soon!! :D
Well done. I'm excited for more! Report Review
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