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Review #1, by redherring The Shack and the Stone

26th August 2009:
I definitely think you've got a brilliant start here! I loved the opening with the description of the Gaunts' house - I thought you had great description all the way through, actually - and I really liked your characterisations, as well. Dumbledore is one of those characters who is almost impossible to get right, but I thought you did a very good job with him, and I thought Doge too seemed spot on.

I thought your dialogue was realistic and also was appropriate for the time period, and the whole chapter flowed well, too. I didn't spot any grammar mistakes or typos either, which is always good :D I also liked the length - it wasn't too long or too short, and worked well for an introductory chapter.

Great first chapter! I look forward to the next. 9/10 :)

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