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Review #1, by magicmuggle01 Marshmallows

19th April 2011:
Loved it. But I just noticed with your other story that you've niot updated since 2009. Any way I loved this one off story and I have to give you 10/10 for the originality off ot.

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Review #2, by MovieMagic Marshmallows

9th November 2009:
Great story! There are 2 things though. I find that when your mouth is burning Milk is better than water. and Lily is spelt with one L not 2. But doesn't make the story any less brilliant!

Author's Response: thank you very much! thanks for the tips, they will definitely help later on in writing! I am glad you read and enjoyed it.

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