It's a little different from you normal style, but very well done. 10/10Author's Response: It is, yes. Thanks very much! Report Review
Really like this. Boys always wabt what they can't havw of course. :-> an instint, if you will.Author's Response: I think it's not only boys, haha. People in general, but Sirius is just a bad case. Thanks for the review! Report Review
Wow, intense. I liked it! =)Author's Response: Thanks very much! Report Review
aw.sweet.poor sirius:)being.bossed around.btw,i think its mean of james&lily wanting soo much from him:)Author's Response: Haha. Great to know he's got some sympathy :P And it is a little too much, which is why he's breaking the promise. Thanks for the review! Report Review
who is this chick?!?!
i love sirius, he's my favorite.
and i'm mad that i don't know who this girl is.
why would she be off limits?
but i obviously loved it :)Author's Response: She's a dear friend of Lily's. A muggle. But I don't know her name, it was really the point. She's a mystery :P Thanks for the review! Report Review
Uhh Vicki, I don't know what got into you either. You are usually so ... embarrased when talking about such dirty, sexual stuff. I know you just... you just say it. But well done, it is pretty good, got the mystery of a good one-shot.Author's Response: Haha. Well, this is so different :P But I'm so very glad you liked it. Thanks for the review! Report Review
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