this is sooo cool!
please write more!!!
ganbarre!
i love it!

Author's Response: Thanks for reading! x

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:(
James acts like an ass in this chap. And I don't like it (look at the nick).
Basically I like your story, and James/OC of any kind, but not when the writer make James look like a jerk..
So, I'll just wait for another chapter to so how it goes (:
Good writing and GL.

Author's Response: Yeah, sorry about that. Trust me, I heart James. Like, totally heart James. I have to say I am truly envious of Lily Evans. Just wait... he gets nicer, I promise!

Thanks for reading. x

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I like that you altered the time frame, actually.

This is oddly spaced, but I don't think that's your fault.

This is a promising start. Off to read more. Paloma

Author's Response: Thanks. Some of my friends weren't sure about the time frame and stuff. It's just I think it's easier to write in a period I actually lived through and know a little about.

Thanks for reading. x

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I just love it! :) She is a person a lot of people can relate too! That is really great for your story. But I think this is really awfully short, which is sad cause now I want to read more, I already favourited it! :) Lara

Author's Response: Oh I'm so sorry :(
I'm just not very good at writing long chapters... it makes it harder to find the right point to cut it off. :/
But there's more to come, don't worry!

^_^

Peace out,

Pixie xxx

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Oh, loved ur story! I absolutely adore James/OC fics.. :)
Please continue? Pretty Please? :P

Author's Response: Thank you so much! It means a lot when somebody enjoys your work.
I have 2 more chapters to upload of this so far... need to get writing... busy busy!
Obviously I can't submit them yet because of the whole hiatus on uploading. But 1st of September I will submit the next chapter for validation. Definitely. I also have another James/OC fanfic (because I am in love with James! :D ) to upload. It kinda shows a different relationship between James and the OC.

Hope you keep reading and making my day by giving me a nice review!

^_^

Peace out,

Pixie xxx

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