it's good eleanor, really good!Author's Response: thanks, love. xxx Report Review
Really good story so far =)
Ahh how copious amounts of alcohol can make you do stupidly wonderful things like kiss Sirius Black =)
Can't wait for the next chapter Keep Writing =)Author's Response: ah yes, alcohol. stupid yet oh so brilliant.
thanks so much xx Report Review
I like your prologue because it really shows off the main character really well. She seems like a really good character.
Can't wait to read on and see where this story goes.
Good writing =)Author's Response: thanks so much! xx Report Review
good story so far, im looking forward to seeing where this goes. The only suggestion i can make is to try and give a bit more character info, because the reader doesn't really know anything about your main character, so if you could just go into detail about that it would be great. keep writing, and update again soon! =]Author's Response: thanks so much for your advice :)
and you'll definitely find out more about her in later chapters.
thanks for reviewing!
xx Report Review
Why isn't there another chapter??Author's Response: sorry, there is now! I got lost with this story, but now it's back! and I have the next few chapters planned out and everything :D Report Review
I liked it, I'd define at as short but sweet.
It was funny and your main character seems very likeable
I like the plot to, it would be good to see where this goes =]
I hope you update soon
spam_up_samAuthor's Response: thank youu :) Report Review
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