6 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Magicalis Writer 1- Ambush

16th April 2012:
Really good, you should really keep writing. would love to see more!

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Review #2, by Jimmbo 5- The Day After

1st October 2009:
This was a really good chapter again, lots of mystery. I have an annoying habit of leaving cliff hangers and I'd forgot how annoying they are!

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Review #3, by Jimmbo 4- Azkaban

12th September 2009:
Wow what a twist at the end. Your descriptions are really vivid and clear. Well Done!

Author's Response: Thanks for the compliments Jimmbo! I'm currently writing chapter 7 and have got chapter 5 in the queue so I hope you enjoy the rest of it if you read it.

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Review #4, by Jimmbo Shacklebolt and Savage

12th September 2009:
I love how you used the coin thing in this chapter. Very clever and another nice chapter

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Review #5, by Jimmbo 1- Ambush

12th September 2009:
Yeah I think that's what's known in the trade as a lightening start. Nice

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Review #6, by Mrs HJ Potter 1- Ambush

24th August 2009:
Very exciting start!

Author's Response: Thanks, that's nice of you! :)

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