Really good, you should really keep writing. would love to see more! Report Review
This was a really good chapter again, lots of mystery. I have an annoying habit of leaving cliff hangers and I'd forgot how annoying they are! Report Review
Wow what a twist at the end. Your descriptions are really vivid and clear. Well Done!Author's Response: Thanks for the compliments Jimmbo! I'm currently writing chapter 7 and have got chapter 5 in the queue so I hope you enjoy the rest of it if you read it. Report Review
I love how you used the coin thing in this chapter. Very clever and another nice chapter Report Review
Yeah I think that's what's known in the trade as a lightening start. Nice Report Review
Very exciting start!Author's Response: Thanks, that's nice of you! :) Report Review
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