6 months .please update it has been to long,you cant end it like that. Report Review
you said its nearly the end,but you're taking so long ,it has been 5 months.please update!im dying! Report Review
They are so sweet ❤❤ I love James and Stac because they're both so courageous and stubborn and loving. The whole wedding scene was an interesting sort of subplot too. I especially loved Ron's advice about marriage, which was pretty funny. I really want to know how/if Stac is going to get away from her family's control. Also, I was wondering...this may be far-fetched, but...there probably aren't many death eaters around anymore. It's been a long time and with Harry and Ron and them bringing them to justice it seems like thre wouldn't be very many. But Harry and Ron are very busy aurors...so is it possible they know something about Stac's family and their business? Maybe that's what they've been working on. And Harry didn't recognize Stac as a Sangraal because they didn't use her full name. Just a wild guess.
Anyway, I love this! Update soon!! Report Review
I'm loving the mystery of all of this! And the characters are wonderful -they're all flawed and complex and endearing and amiable. I like seeing them change. Even if James is being a bit childish...I love him anyway.
I still have a few chapters to go before I catch up, but right now what I'm hoping for (probably unrealistically, but this is just for fun) is some big, glorious revolution where all the nicer, cooler, younger wizards just band together against the evil older people messing their lives up. (Yeah, probably not going to happen, but I don't know, thought I'd share where my thoughts are at this point in the story) I was thinking this would involve a lot of espionage, maybe a little reuniting of the remainder of the order of the Phoenix and Dimbledore's army, and Anastacia befriending her guard. I really have hope for Creeten, you see (as unfortunate as his name may be...), because unlike his brother, he still has some...feelings. And independent thought. Sure, he seems to like to boss Anastacia around a bit, and he's probably mostly doing it because one of his goals in life is probably to rise to his father's position, br I think he must also care about Anastacia, at least a little bit. Everything he does is to protect her. He sacrifices his life for hers and is unfailingly loyal to her. He doesn't trust her as far as he can throw her and he doesn't seem to like her all that much, but he has reason for feeling that way -she's made his stupid job kind of difficult at times. The same goes for the rest of her guard. Maybe not all of them as I don't really know much about most of them but the Farlows seem cool. Regardless of whether there's an actual uprising coming (I mean I do sort to expect one in some capacity, but you never know) I think it would be smart of Anastacia to beforend her guard. It may seem like it's too late for that but you can always try again to connect with someone. People change over time, so maybe they would get on a little better now. But why would she want to be enemies with him? It only makes her situation worse. She might gain a little leeway here and there if he actually likes her and trusts her. Not to mention more loyalty to her rather than mostly her father.
So I see them all banding together and a crazy, big battle or an escape and just all the good people taking over and putting an end to the evil rule. Because that would be fantastic. Maybe the guard would join in because they have their own friends and want their own lives, I don't know.
I just hope Anastacia is brave and gets out. It's really cool how Duardo did that, though he might just get killed for it...regardless it was brave and noble (at least assuming Celeste's story was accurate). At the moment he's kind of the Fortinbras to Anastacia's Hamlet.
Another thing I don't really get -did Anastacia's father ever really care for her? Does he now? I'm not sure if I should think that he never really cared, or her used to care but it's faded over the years, or if he still cares but it's never been a very significant amount of caring (meaning it's a lower priority to his plans for world domination or whatever).
This is so fun to read.
Update soon! Report Review
Owen is really cool. I like your twist on amortentia too -how the smells aren't the actual scents of the actual people they love but smells that remind them of the people they love. And the flashback was adorable and I feel like I now understand a lot better why Anastacia's always let James take the blame. Report Review
This is a really cool idea, but I kind of hate Anastacia. I mean that's not a very honest or loyal thing to do is it? Not really characteristic of a good friend. She shouldn't drag him down and make him take the blame and punishments...why does she do that? Does she not care about him very much? Report Review
Lovely luvey chapter! I loved the bit with Ted, Harry and James in the attic, and what romantic gesture in the Great Hall. Can't wait for the next! Report Review
update soon. pretty please. Report Review
absolutely lovely chapter! I loved how clueless James was, typical! Please update soon this is by far my favourite story I have read, you are truly talented. Keep writing, I am always checking to see when you update!
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So unbelievably glad you've updated - I'd all but lost hope and this is one of my all-time fav stories. Brilliant chapter, as always :) Report Review
Incredible story. I have been waiting for a very long time to find out what happens next but it was well worth the wait (but please don't make us wait that long again! haha)
Stac's birthday sounded magical and unique... i wish my birthday's were that special! Also, I love Stac and Jame's relationship Report Review
Loved it!! So glad you've updated, and it's such a cute chapter as well. Good work :) Report Review
OMG I'm so excited this is back!I love it!I can't wait to read more,update soon please!:) Report Review
I'm so upset it's taken this to get James to realize his feelings!I have no idea who to root for now.
Can I please have an Owen of my own though?That'd be nice.
Gotta keep reading!:) Report Review
I sure hope its not abandoned. That would be a bummer. This was a decent story. Report Review
Is this story abandoned? Report Review
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE ADD THE NEXT CHAPTER. This is one of the best books I have read, truly!!! It is a crime not to post more chapters! Do you know when the next one will be up?
-AKS21 Report Review
Wow! That took a while, but it was worth it. I was wandering HPFF when I decided to check this story again and I was sooo happy! Cannot wait to see how this ends, this was one of the first fanfics I'd ever read. Report Review
PLEASE SUBMIT THE NEXT CHAPTER (or five) I LOVE THIS STORY! do you know when the next chapter will be up? This is one of the best stories i have ever read...just sayin'
Also, i love the little parts of french, it is so nice because I speak french and I love how I can understand, what I would refer to more as the silent part of the text.
S'il vous plait, s'il vous plait, s'il vous plait soumettre un autre chapitre bientot! J'aime (ou Jem ;) haha) cette histoire tellement et que vous etes l'ecrivain le plus incroyable
(desole les accents ne fonctionnent pas)
-AKS21 Report Review
I absolutely adore your writing. For the past two years i've just been rereading harry potter over and over and over again and no matter what other books I try to read nothing is worth it. This is one of the best books that I have ever read aside from Harry Potter. J'adore (yes, i speak french and i love how you use different languages, I also speak german!). You are an amazing writer, you have a very powerful skill of completely capturing a character and situation so that the reader can paint a very vivid image in their mind. I have cried and laughed throughout the whole book. You should be so proud of yourself! I found this chapter particularly good. The rich description of the potion was very convincing. ah i just can't get enough of this story. PLease release the next chapter as soon as possible, i don't think i can survive for too long without. In regards to your muse, try Marchin' On (OneRepublic), pretty much any mumford & sons (i love them), bon over, ben howard, or ed sheeran. Good luck! When do you think the next chapter will be out? Report Review
I need the next chapter! Please, please, please, please, please write it as soon as possible! Report Review
AMAZING CHAPTER! I adored it, I am completely addicted to this book. You are incredible Report Review
I absolutely adore your work. I feel you have really captured JK's voice and i'm completely addicted to your book! Report Review
hey there! i just started to read your story, which is quite excellent by the way, though i'd like point out that the insult-y thing 'dummer kopf' isn't actually correct german. you may wonder now, how i know that, but i happen to be german, so i can tell. 'dummkopf' would be a proper expression, maybe you want to change it. just saying.
however, i look forward to the rest of your story! Report Review
Yay! I love how you've conveyed Stac's growth since starting to date James. She's all lit up and much stronger, and it's all right there in the writing. Nice job too coming up with a potion/process to rid herself of the bracelet; it was just gruesome enough to be believable. And yay, yay, yay! They're finally together. The fangirl in me went "Sque" when she ran through the door.
Now, I've read the chapter three times waiting for the next one. It's only been a week but I'm soo ready for the next chapter. Thanks for sticking with one of my favorite stories and sorry for not reviewing more! Report Review
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