Excellent writing. It doesn't even feel like a fanfiction anymore.
I hope you finish this story because it is genuinely interesting.
Your understanding of the characters really showed by how you stay true to them...it's something that's very hard to find. Great pace and great descriptions.

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Love this story! Been waiting for an update forever! Please please please update asap!!

Author's Response: Thanks so much. I have chapters lined up on my laptop but unfortunately its broken! I will update as soon as its fixed, i will not abandon this! :)

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the "chapters" need to be longer plz it seems unlikely you could fit a story in these short chapters, unless there about 0 of them ;)

but i think i might see the story line, being a writer myself, and I think it's good. :) 9/10

Author's Response: Thanks. :) The chapters do get longer, and i have a few lined up, yet my laptop is broken! Will try to update ASAP! Thanks again! (:

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I love this story so far! It's not cliche but it has the classic heads dormitory - obviously the best fan fiction add in =). Can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks. :) Unfortunately my laptop is broken! Will try to update ASAP though! Glad you like it! Thanks again! (:


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Pretty Awesome So Far :)

DefyingBoundries x

Author's Response: Thanks. :) Unfortunately my laptop is broken! Will try to update soon! Glad you liked it! Thanks again! (:


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Aw Draco saved Hermione! Reading dis made my day! heheheheh more please! Keep it coming! :)

Great chapter! Update soon!

Love,

:)

~aida~

Author's Response: Aida, i love your reviews! Haha.Thanks. :) Unfortunately my laptop is broken! Will try to update soon! (:


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Hey, this is really good stuff. It's my first time at a fanfiction site, but I am really impressed. This flows really well and is believable and I got sucked in as well. I didn't want to stop reading it.

Author's Response: Thanks. :) Im glad you like it and seem to want to keep reading! Unfortunately my laptop is broken! Will try to update soon though! (:


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I think that of all Draco Hermione Head boy/girl I like this one most.They are in character.So,good job and update as soon as you can.Bye!

Author's Response: Hi! Thanks for reviewing :) That really means a lot! I feel that i must keep them in character because i don't like fics where they jump straight into bed! I really want this to look as if it could actually happen! :)

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Wow. Hahahah! Aw they went on a broom ride!

Update soon :)

Lovie,

:)

~aida~

Author's Response: You're my regular reviewer so thanks once again! :) I've already posted a new chapter... Basically i'm updating as soon as each one gets validated! :)

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Hello!

Draco is sooo yummy! Cant wait to see some more Draco/Hermione action! ohlalalal. heheheh

Update soon!

Love,

:)

~aida~

P.S I forget to sign in! :) Lol

Author's Response: Hey!
Thanks for your review :)
Believe me i can't wait for some either, but i'm pacing it for now!

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I Could Never Imagine Hermione Being Draco's Bitch. If Anything, Possibly The Other Way Round. :)

Nice Chapter.
DefyingBoundries.

Author's Response: Thanks for your review. :)
Oh, i don't intend on her being Draco's bitch at all! Hermione would not stand for it! :)
Thanks again!

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Holy mother of Slytherin thats was awe-sum! You got some more? Great chapter! Update soon! Love you! Mwah!

Love,

:)

~aida~

Author's Response: I'm so glad you like it. I have posted another chapter! Up to chapter seven are pre-written, so it's just a case of awaiting validation! 3 days backlog! Zz.
Keep reading! :)

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This Is Nicely Written :)
Will You Be Updating?

Author's Response: Thanks for your review. I have written up to chapter seven, so it's just a case of waiting for validation! Keep reading! :)

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The were both Black with a thunderous amount of cushions. I think you mean tremendous or numerous not thunderous. Thunder is a sound that comes after lighting, thus thunderous would refer to a sound not amount. Tremendous could mean large or many. Numerous would mean many.

This is not a flame, just a comment on one word you used. I hope you keep writing as your story has potential.

Author's Response: Thank-you very much for the review. I'm going to correct the mistake you recognised. I am indeed going to keep writing. It's just a case of awaiting validation! Hope you keep reading! :)

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Hi! *waves*

Well, I like the chapter! :) hehheh, Funny reading about Hermione/Draco! hhheh please write more! Please?


Love,

;)

~aida~

P.S Update soon! :)

Author's Response: Hello. *Waves Back* Haha.
I'm glad you like it. I've actually already written up to Chapter 6, so i only have to wait for validation! Which is a nuisance!
So, you can expect many more chapters to come! Thanks for reviewing! :)

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that was really good although if i may say you need to make the chapters longer:) it's more..what the words i am searching for...exiting??
:)
anyways good start though:) i am exited to see what happens:))

Author's Response: Hi, thanks for your review. I am still kinda new to this thing! I have just posted a new chapter, after a really long wait. Two months is too long! It, unfortunately is still kinda short, though a little longer than the first. I am working on a few more tonight, and may actually post some too. Thanks again, hope you keep reading :)

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your story really made me laugh, i can't wait tilll you write some more!

Author's Response: Thanks very much, i'm still working on getting the right feel of the humorous side of the story of how i want to write it. Thanks for your review, and sorry for the 2 month wait! But i have put a new chapter up which is awaiting validation, and hope to write up and post a few more tonight! Thanks again :)

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Good job! I love it I have a story where Draco and Hermione have to share a common room too. Are you going to put up another chapter soon?

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, much appreciated :)
Im so sorry, i've been really busy with other work, but i have just posted a new chapter which is awaiting validation. I think i may do a few more this evening to catch up! I think when i have time i'll have a look at your story too. Thanks again.

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