I kinda like this.
The start wasn't real 'grabby', and I doubt I would ever think of Helga as a 'dreamy' person. But overall it's looking retty good.
It's especially nice to see Luna holding center stage because I think she is capable of anything.
Can't wait for the next chapter, and am really surprised to be the first review.Author's Response: Annachie,
Thanks! Everyone seems to think that Luna is a crazy weird character, but I've always thought of her as one of my favorites! I was really annoyed that there were hardly any Luna post-Hogwarts stories out. Helga is dreamy because she's in love... I actually meant the start to be a seperate founders fanfiction but... I'll try to keep writing without changing it to a completely different story... Thanks so much for reviewing!!
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