So, ummm, is this story abandoned? It's realy good, but you havent updated for like 2 years? 10/10 though. I realy like it! Report Review
Great start to the story! Teddy's being a bit of a jerk, isn't he? Stupid boys. I quite like Victoire in this fic, she seems so un-prissy for once, which is a nice change.
I can't wait to find out what happens next, and I'm looking forward to another chapter!Author's Response: Thanks! Yup, Teddy is a bit of a prat, but he's just an arrogant guy, I guess! I like working with Victoire because her character really could go any way based on her parents. She's fun to write about :) Thanks so much for the review! Report Review
wow, a brillant read so far!
you had me hooked (and thats saying somthing) lol
you intoduced alot of new characters but i have to say you did them with no problem, i felt like i was really using my 5 senses thro victorie's body, exactly what a writer wants to achive,.,well done!Author's Response: Wow, thanks a lot! That's so flattering that you had so many nice things to say! :) Thanks so much for reviewing, I really appreciate it. I was worried about all the character intros, so I'm glad you said it wasn't too bad! Thanks again :D Report Review
I liked it! Please, update soon. You're a good writer and its entertaining so far.Author's Response: Wow, thank you! And thanks for reviewing! I'm glad you're liking it. Yeah, I wish I got a little more positive feedback for this story but I will continue it nonetheless! I'm pretty busy with school right now but hopefully I'll have a chance to write more. I'm glad you're liking it, though :) Report Review
I think it's cute, I'll read more for sure...Author's Response: Yay thanks :) Thanks so much for the review! Glad you like it. Report Review
haha! Good job! I admit that there were a lot of characters introduced, but you did a good job at introducing them. Your dialogue was flawless, and I really got into Victoire's character. My favorite part would have to be when Teddy broke up with her, because he is normally portrayed to be that nice guy, and you did away with it. You are a talented writer, and you write comedy well. I can't wait to read the next chapter...perhaps Victoire will discover she's pregnant? I dunno. You've got yourself a new reader!
P.S: If you wouldn't mind a little CC, your chapter lacked detail, making it a little hard to follow. Besides this, good start! Do you have a Meet the Author's page so I can ask you a couple of questions?Author's Response: Wow, thanks so much for such a detailed/kind review! Yeah, I wanted to kind of change up the notion that Teddy's this perfect, sweet, hot (read: never would exist in real life) guy. I'm glad you liked that portrayal! Hopefully I'll be able to continue working on the next chapter soon; I'm pretty busy right now but time will appear I hope. Anyway, thanks so much for reading and reviewing! I don't have a Meet the Author's page, but I can create one if you want? Thanks for having such a vested interest in my work! :) Report Review
Oh I like this! It's a good beginning, looking forward to more!!Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you like it :) Thanks for reviewing and being my first reviewer!! Report Review
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