This was an interesting take on the original story. I have honestly never really pictured Cho with George but who knows, their common lose could've made a strong enough beginning connection. So overall good story.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm not really a fan of Cho, but I just kept thinking of them others. Thank you though!
-Zoe Lovegood

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That was really nice. I liked it a lot and I really loved the way you portrayed George. I was never a big fan of Cho, but you kind of made me like her. Nice job :)

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Cho is Lyra, isn't she! That's amazing! This is a really cool story. I like how you were able to describe George's loss. If it isn't Lyra, I'm an idiot (which I already knew), but still George/Cho is a pairing I've never seen before. It was cool to read.

Author's Response: I'm not sure what you mean by Cho being Lyra? And you're not an idiot! You like me and anyone who likes me is brilliant by my book! Thanks so much! *Blow kisses!*
-Zoe Lovegood

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so I may want to make a banner for this one too!:D
I'll try this! Great one shot:)

-katiefelton:)

Author's Response: Oh thanks! :D You can choose what to do with this one, I never thought it deservered a banner but thank you! You make such beautiful banners! I'm glad you liked it!

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I really like the idea of Cho being the one to comfort George. I never did care much for her in the books and you made me see a different side of her.

Author's Response: Oh thank you! I never liked Cho either ;D Bit of a cry baby if you ask me, but I thought she deservered some happiness. And then I remember George and I thought 'Hey they could be couple!' besides I never liked George/Angelina. I never liked that pairing because Fred and her were dating and I think that it's a bit wrong for the dead brother's girlfriend to marry the alive brother. I found that dis-respectful to Fred. Just what I think, though I still LOVE JK! She is a Deitie!

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OMG that was beautiful!

Author's Response: Really? Thanks! I know it was a weird pairing(my friends laughed at me when I told them) but Cho and George both know what it was like to lose the person they loved most. Glad you thought it was beautiful! My motto is You Review Mine I Review Yours. :)

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