Aw that was good! Very cute story, Report Review
I think this story is the only story that actually shows how they got together. I was a little confused at the beginning, but I got it. I'm slow. Report Review
loved this story 10/10 Report Review
this is really good so far... Report Review
OoOoh a good start!!!!!! Report Review
I thought that story was gonna be rubbish, because of the length and stuff, but really, its better than nearly all the long stories Ive read! Well done, such a cool story. Report Review
Your story was great!! It was kind of short and seemed a little bit, rushed. I loved how Ron and Hermione finally did get together, and I love the way they did it. Ron's line about wanting to argue with Hermione instead of get along with someone was really great. Awesome job!! =) Report Review
AWW i love a good sappy fluff with Ron and Hermione! good work! Report Review
Major crack up!! I love it!!! I'd give it a 10!!! Report Review
Your story is sooooo soooo good I hope to read another of your stories Report Review
I love your ff. keep on writing.
one of the best stuff i ever read, really. ron and hermione are wonderful, your absolutely right. Report Review
I really liked this story! It was short, but sweet. =) Report Review
i liked it, short and sweet! Report Review
Awsome 10/10 Report Review
Awww, I like it. Report Review
wow it has sequal possibility! hehe but i luved it sOo far Report Review
Cute idea for a fic! The interaction and thoughts between/of Ron and Hermione were very true-to-character. I enjoyed reading Harry's thoughts on the matter and how clueless he was. I think it might have been better to just concentrate on Ron and Hermione's thoughts etc. than putting Ginny and Harry in the mix so that it's more condensed (especially since it was a short, one-shot fic). This would give it more focus. You should definitely consider writing another fic. I see potential!Author's Response: Thanks for the review! It's great to know Ron and Hermione seemed in character; that's what I was going for (obviously). Now, do you mean mention of Harry and Ginny at all, of the fact that they interfered at the end, or that there were a few subtle hints that they might like each other? Because you see, if it weren't for Ginny and Harry's meddling, Ron would never have gone after Hermione and I thought that I'd just add a little Harry and Ginny just for good measure (I think they're going to end up together in the books as well). Anyway, let me know what you think. Thanks for reading! Report Review
Adorable ending!! ‘But I’d rather argue with you than get along with anyone else, Hermione.' That was sooo sweet! Again, great fic. Keep up the good work!Author's Response: That means a lot to me because I am so proud of that line! (It's my favourite part in the story). Thanks for reading! Report Review
Nice Story, Love happy endings Report Review
interesting...with dire results..haha i get it! haha well keep me posted Report Review
awwww how awesome, hehe luv it so far! Report Review
I like it so far and I'm excited to see where you take this. My only question/suggestion is that maybe you could try and explain what Harry was trying to do with the "plan"
to get revenge. That would be really nice.
Other than that, the story is great and I really like it.
~JoannaAuthor's Response: Glad you like the story! Yeah, so about Harry's plan. You see, this story seems to have a mind of its own and the 'plan' just kind of walked into the story all by itself. I was planning on developping that aspect, except it seems I am just not very good at writing about stuff like that (i.e. I can only write Ron/Hermione romance). So unfortunately I think that part might just be cut. It was just gonna be some sort of thing to get Bellatrix Lestrange caught or something. I wasn't planning on having it work out, either, as these things never do really. Phew! So, yeah, sorry about that. Feel free to pick it up in another story (if you write them) if you feel so inclined. Thanks for reading! Report Review
Cool fic! I'm enjoying it. Update again soon! Report Review
wow.....awesome! update real soon! Report Review
Good chap. Update soon. Report Review
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