I love the way you portrayed Arthur. I never really pictured Molly that way but you did it well. Report Review
First of all, adorable!! :)
I've never actually read a fic with Molly and Arthur disliking each other, so this was a nice twist, but I'm still glad that you resorted to them being together at the end.
As you know, I really like this idea! Just a couple things. With such quality thoughts swirling throughout the story, you should elaborate more on them. Instead of just stating an action or something, like
"Molly just looked at Arthur as he continued on."
say something like
"Molly stared at Arthur blankly, head tilted slightly, as if trying to figure him out."
You know what I mean?
Anyway, other than that, I think this is great! :) Report Review
cute fic. it's interesting and unusual because Molly didn't like Arthur.^_^
Harry and GinnyAuthor's Response: Well thank you!! I've been reading most of the fics about this couple and I wanted to put a different spin on it. I'm glad you liked it. Report Review
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