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Review #1, by MoonyandProngs You'll Never Walk Alone

14th May 2010:
That was great! I loved how Cedric proposed. It made me a little teary! 10/10!

Author's Response: thank you so much! i'm really pleased to hear i pulled some emotion out of you! thanks for the support. have a wonderful day!

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Review #2, by seamussusan09 You'll Never Walk Alone

27th December 2009:
I love this story so beautiful
I have never heard of people shipping Hermoine/Cedric
But I love Hermoine/Cedric so lovely :-)
I love the bit where Cedric says I want you to be my wife.
So sweet

Author's Response: thank you so much for the lovely review. it means a lot to me that you liked this as much as you did and were willing to leave your thoughts behind in a review. thanks for your undying support!! Happy Holidays!! :)

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Review #3, by Deni You'll Never Walk Alone

25th September 2009:
That was spectacular! Well done!

Author's Response: thank you so much for the lovely review! it's great to hear such a positive response i something that i pulled together within an hour or two. thanks!!

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Review #4, by www_meat_org You'll Never Walk Alone

16th August 2009:
Thanks for requesting the review!

I'm going to start of with your areas of concern. The first one, characterization was fine in the story. Truthfully, you didn't portray Hermione exactly how I would, but that's why you're the author of the story, not me. I do think that you got Cedric spot on and in general, you did an amazing job making your characters well rounded. Your other area of concern was flow I believe, and I think your flow was perfect. The story never seemed slow at any point and I feel like there was a lot of interesting aspects to the plot. By that I mean it was good how you had her listening to the conversation while doing dishes and the whole thing with the car and driving skills.

Now it's time for me to just talk about the story, which is my favorite thing to do! First of all, I've never read a Cedric/Hermione so at first, I figured I wouldn't be a huge fan. But the way you wrote the characters managed to change my mind, so that should tell you something :-) The whole story was so cute and I could actually see it happening.

The only thing that seemed a bit iffy to me was the conversation with her mom. I'm guessing that's where you had to throw the quote in, because some parts of it just didn't seem like it was you writing, it seemed almost forced fit.

I have to end by saying that Cedric must be an amazing boyfriend! I'd love to know more about their kids or him becoming minister!

Great Job,
~Casey (aka Vegirl123)

Author's Response: thank you so much for the wonderful review. i am glad the flow and characters seemed to be alright. i enjoyed writing this but something was off after i read through it and everything i still have no idea what. thanks again.

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Review #5, by CedricHermioneForever You'll Never Walk Alone

11th August 2009:
So good, please continue to write Hermione and Cedric fan fiction.

Author's Response: thanks...i wrote something else a long time ago but hopefully something will spark my mind in the near future again. i have a lot to work on but i always have time for little one-shots like this. thanks again.

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