I couldn't help but notice that you haven't updated in around three years. I really think this story could go far. Please update! Report Review
no I cant read this I didnt even finish i stopped at the "Illusion" part. Hermionie& Ron grew up with Harry Potter. Not some cold remote voldemort like guy who hated kids. Report Review
I really like this story so far. I think that Rose's outlook on life is interesting and the way you have made the character is really good.
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Haha, I like the challenge. Un-happy ending :)
I thought it was good! A good prologue, a good beginning, a good starting point. It would be interesting to see how Rose tackles Hogwarts (if she even goes to Hogwarts at all) and all that stuff.
Alright, update soon! :P Report Review
Looking forward to reading another chapter. This is very interesting, since nobody knows what's wrong with her. I wonder when she will die... Report Review
Hey, I enjoyed reading this, and am interested in seeing where you will go with it. I hope to be able to read another piece of the story soon! At first I wasn't sure whos point of view it was from, Rose or Scorpius, but then I saw that the narrarator's brother was Hugo so that cleared it up. I'm just confused as to why the parents would keep it such a secret, especially if its Ron and Hermione, I can't see them keeping this a secret from the rest of the family. Oh well, like you said, it was just an introduction, i'm just impatient, haha :P I look forward to reading more! Report Review
This looks like a promising little story. Looking forward to the next chapter! ^_^Author's Response: thanks. i'll update as soon as i can. Report Review
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