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Review #1, by Silent_Fire Loss

4th September 2009:
“Loss” is all about the life of a ghostly house elf—what a novel idea! It's a shame, though, because while it's rather interesting, nothing is really experienced in the story. Instead it's a report of events. Of course, the Staff Challenge it was written for required a one-shot, but if this were lengthened it seems it'd do much better. (5/10 – Hopefully Readers Get to See a Polished Version of This Story Sometime in the Future!)

Author's Response: Thank you for the review, Silent_Fire! I'm sorry you didn't like the way the story was told, but thank you for alerting me to that weakness; not having much of a turn for action, I guess I just didn't notice. :) Ah well, thanks anyway! And if I ever have the inclination to I might certainly polish it up a bit :D

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