Beautifully written. Very realistic with Molly and Arthur's grieving. Thanks for a good read. Report Review
i love when Ginny says "i can and will kiss you again tomorrow. that's a promise." i laughed for five minutes when i read that Report Review
This is very good. I think you captured the emotions quite well. You should really think about trying a longer story. Report Review
great job. u had me crying. so real, the loss of all the people who died in the series, it's just the pain is so real, good job! Report Review
great fic u have here.^_^
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Very Nice! I just love that Mr. Weasley, he always knows just the right thing to say. ~Lauraf68 Report Review
What a brilliantly written oneshot! Well done! You made me tear up there in the middle... Very well written and a realistic series of events, excellent, thank you for sharing.
p.s. just one thing though, Fabian and Gideon Prewett are Molly's brothers...xxAuthor's Response: Thanks for the lovely review - you're absolutely right about the Prewett brothers and I've just edited my story to reflect that. Doh! I think my confusion came from the whole Black family tree thing. Anyway - its all put right now... :) Report Review
AW! OH MY FREAKIN' SKITTLES! i loved this story!!! sooo cute!!! great job, poor harry *sniff*! *hands you a brownie* bloody brilliant!!!
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Well i now Harry would have felt Survior guilt but i don't think anyone in the wizarding history had faced anything like him, watching his parents die in his dreams for abt 16yrs since his age of 1, facing death threats in his school since age 11 and that too at your first yr, facing death threats for every possible year at school is not like someone else and experienced in addition to that witnessing friend die in his 4th yr and godfather at 5th yr and his mentor 6th yr then the battle i don't think anyone faced death willingly and come back to finish off the enemy. That's quite a stuff.
I would suggest you to write another fanfic continuing from where you leftAuthor's Response: HI thanks for responding. I reckon I probably opened a can of worms with this story - just playing with some ideas, you know. PTSD/Survivors guilt - fascinating - you're right, that there's too much to deal with there in a one-shot - I thought that moonlit conversation with Mr Weasley might be a good first step for Harry. Hope you enjoyed it. Report Review
omg perfect!!! u got all the emtions down wonderfully!! a beautiful story displaying all the characters exactly as they would be!! Report Review
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