{reviewid: 2754803, reviewer: 'Funinthesun%21'}
26th November 2012:
Awesome story! Plz update
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{reviewid: 2666262, reviewer: 'Hope%27s%20Mom'}
28th February 2012:
Still a great story premise and story beginning!
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{reviewid: 2627594, reviewer: 'theycallherkaush'}
11th December 2011:
i'm very, very addicted to this. update, soon, yeah?
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{reviewid: 2614941, reviewer: 'Fawks5'}
12th November 2011:
That was really good! I hope you can update soon!
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{reviewid: 2611791, reviewer: 'Lillylover22'}
5th November 2011:
he is everywhere. i love it. update soon please. 9/10 =]
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{reviewid: 2611789, reviewer: 'Lillylover22'}
5th November 2011:
haha. i really like this chapter and this idea. i've read a really good seer story that has james the second in it as well. ive just forgotton the name. its in my favourites though. 9/10 =]
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{reviewid: 2611787, reviewer: 'Lillylover22'}
5th November 2011:
This is a great start to the story!! 9/10 =]
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{reviewid: 2591121, reviewer: 'Hope%27s%20Mom'}
18th September 2011:
I think I've reviewed this story before but since I've been reading all your stories over the last several days, I'll do it again. It's a really fun story! She is so anti-James that I do wonder what will happen to change that. Thank you for writing and I hope you conyinue this story.
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{reviewid: 2539349, reviewer: 'Loony_Scorpy'}
28th June 2011:
awesome story! soo funny! can't wait for more :D
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{reviewid: 2538291, reviewer: 'angelaaa%20'}
25th June 2011:
epp! update pretty please. :D your story so far is very interesting and i would love to read more. :)
keep up the good work!
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{reviewid: 2521754, reviewer: 'marthenic'}
15th May 2011:
Ooo...can't wait for the next chapter. Love this story.
Update soon?
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{reviewid: 2506248, reviewer: 'clockwork_angel'}
11th April 2011:
stunning. i love all your stories! keep up the fantastic work, even though I wish you would update more often
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{reviewid: 2503066, reviewer: 'taps_017'}
4th April 2011:
I love this story & i'm so glad you've updated again!
The plot's moving along nicely and I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next!
Please, please, please don't leave it so long to update next time!! :)
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{reviewid: 2497781, reviewer: 'You%20Have%20No%20Idea%20Who'}
23rd March 2011:
Yay! New chapters make me very happy. Can't wait to read more!
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{reviewid: 2496526, reviewer: 'Bertle'}
20th March 2011:
Lmfao. Oh, poor Avaira. I feel so sorry for her. I would hate to know who I was going to marry, and be able to do nothing about it but wait! However, this was a really fabulous chapter. You write beautifully and the plot is one I have yet to read, which is refreshing. I favourited this story a long time ago and am glad I kept checking it :). Update again soon! 10/10!
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{reviewid: 2495546, reviewer: 'funkysam94'}
19th March 2011:
best story ever! update soon! :)
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{reviewid: 2491673, reviewer: 'shenanigan'}
9th March 2011:
i love love love this story. your characters come alive and it's just...really good. i'm so excited to see what happens next, please update soon!
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{reviewid: 2491551, reviewer: 'marieluz'}
9th March 2011:
A-a-a-a-amazing! So glad you updated! Please please keep updating because this is really really good!
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{reviewid: 2488516, reviewer: 'Stefobie23'}
3rd March 2011:
yayayayay an update so exciting! really good job i cant wait untill they get togeather. write fast and update soon.
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{reviewid: 2488396, reviewer: 'Leela'}
3rd March 2011:
Nice story, so far.
The only thing I don't like is that -so far- the story seems to be about Avaira and James, her dread and visions only. I get that she can't forget what's going to happen, but there's nothing at all about anything else in her life. I can't really say what she's like either, her character seems very vague to me. She's just whining all the time and acting pretty immaturely.
I like how you describe her friends, James and Fred, though. And I like the Fred/Alice thing, no matter how that turns out.
I like the way you write. How you put little details expertly into the story. You create their world and it's not a boring explanation or list of things-to-know-about-them.
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{reviewid: 2488376, reviewer: 'dobbyismyhero22'}
3rd March 2011:
LOVE this story!! I can't believe I didn't find it before!! (:
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{reviewid: 2488287, reviewer: 'Hope%27s%20Mom'}
2nd March 2011:
I like your seer story - I just found it tonight! It would be rough to know ahead of something happening that you didn't like. I look forward to reading about Vaira's struggles with her fate. Thanks for writing! I have just reread "Swan" tonight, too. You are quite a talented writer.
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{reviewid: 2488276, reviewer: 'still_fly'}
2nd March 2011:
Ah, this chapter was good! I really like the story, and your style of writing it really smooth and flows well. It's nice to read, and I can't wait for more!!
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{reviewid: 2488271, reviewer: 'Marvola'}
2nd March 2011:
Yay! really new idea. i love it. really excellent!
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{reviewid: 2488266, reviewer: 'DancingDarling'}
2nd March 2011:
This was a nice chapter, but some bits were hard to understand. For example the one sentence on how she had to spend three hours with him. It may just be my stupidity. Your sentences don't quite flow either. I do really like this idea of yours and cannot wait to see how it pans out. Hope your enthusiasm returns
-DD
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