great story u have here although u wrote "Vermon" when it should be "Vernon" and also, u should separate the dialogues so we don't get confused. this story was fantastic!!!^_^
Harry and GinnyAuthor's Response: Thank you. You are the best.:):):) Report Review
well, very nice take on Lily's swaying emotions thru her pov of course. U really reflected her inner thoughts well on a variety of things like d tragic death of her parents, her changing feelings towards James n also her being forlon at Petunia's venomous letter. It was so-sad at certain places n i felt bad for Lily but d last line made it up for all.. i liked d punch in d end n also d fact dat Lily finally became happy.. So, overall.. good piece of writing n well done!
-AashnaAuthor's Response: Oh thank you. YOUR review mean a whole lot to me. Thanks for reviewing!:) Report Review
AWW! I loved it! So adorable! I even teared like a really small bit...*stands in puddle of own tear* Not very much of course. anyhoo! I really really loved it! So super cute! PLEASE keep writing Lily and James stories! I swear I'll read them! *Claps and a cookie*-CharlyAuthor's Response: Oh thank you so much. That was my first Full Lily and James story. I am so glad you liked it. Thank you for reviewing!:) Report Review
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