Very Good! I could totally see that happening!

10/10
Kattia

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As good as it could be I suppose. It's hard to write from the POV of some one like him, but you've done well. 9/10

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You've never written from Voldemort's POV before? The entire time I was reading this, I was certain you must have spent time, stories, something perfecting it. I was mightily impressed. Tom Riddle was simply chilling. He was completely creepy and psychopathic and manipulative and . . . OMG, it was like a window into his disturbed mind. However you managed to get there, I don't know, but you were a great guide for we readers! And you did this in a songfic! I normally detest songfics. My jaw is on the floor right now. This story is just amazing and through the roof with awesomeness.

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Raielle's interpretation of Tom Riddle is brilliant in “Inside Lingo,” a song-fic where he seduces a ghost into finding Ravenclaw's diadem of wisdom. Although the beginning is abrupt and many of the adjectives and adverbs used are common, there are also jewels hidden within the story. With the right omissions it could be buffed up to sparkling, just like the crown Tom searches for. (7/10)

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you did really good with Tom Riddle. that is exactly how he would've done it.

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