4 Reviews Found

Review #1, by FIERY FALCON Chapter One

15th November 2009:
GREAT STORY KEEP IT UP

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Review #2, by apAidan Chapter One

14th November 2009:
a good beginning. draco falls into the usual villain trap of talking too much, but all in all very good.

one small complaint. I think you want 'rogue' not 'rouge'.

apAidan

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Review #3, by Fia Delacour Chapter One

13th November 2009:
Hmmm, I sense something good will come out from this piece..Keep on writing, suffice enough to say that you've intrigued me :-)

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Review #4, by kimmypotter Chapter One

12th November 2009:
I'm glad Harry and Ron got there in time to save her. Great beginning to the story.:)

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