LOVE IT!!! Amazing. Well written and such a lovely stories. I love harmony stories already, but this just told you so much about Hermione that it was awesome. It showed you how misunderstood by people she is. I give you a 100/10 for this, but i really can't so you'll have to settle for a 10/10. I would think about doing a sequel to this if i was you, but that's just me. :) Great job.Author's Response: thanks for the reveiw :) Report Review
That was something. From the books, I remember how difficult it is for Harry to deal with crying girls and you changed that here, making him more understanding and empathetic than in the books. I'm surprised that she feels so strongly, even in the middle of her breakdown. I'm most struck by Hermione's belief that she could kill someone, even by accident. It's a very different take. Report Review
This is some serious talent! The story, though just a one-shot, was very well written. The characters are very logicial as to why they love each other (I can't stand when Hermonie suddenly feels for Harry for no reason whatsoever. And vise versa. It drives me nuts).
However, I don't really like one-shots: you should try a short story sometime! It is more enjoyable to read and is more...complete? But I know certian writers only write certian ways, so I can't really change that, can I?
Anyway, I'll be scouting out for more stories, and I can't wait to see more! 9/10Author's Response: thanks for the advice... just put up the first chapter of another Harry/Hermione story called the Power of Thunder that should be a short story hopefully
Glad you liked it :) Report Review
I'm not a Harry/Hermione fan, actually you could call me an anti-fan. lol.
But OMG! This story was so sweet, so cute. They seemed to be in character and I loved that Harry knew all those things about her, so sweet.
keep writing!Author's Response: thanks for the reveiw :) i love that an anti Harry/Hermione fan loves my story that means loads :) i plan on writing more storys
Thanks soo much :) Report Review
This is lush. It is officially in my favourites. I love Harry and Hermoine. This story is written brilliantly.
10/10Author's Response: thank you soo much for the reveiw really glad u enjoyed my writing :) Report Review
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