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Review #1, by greenbeanjean You can break down a man, and build him back up again

14th April 2014:
Yes! I'm still here and I still love this story! I'm so glad you updated. I'm a little worried about how Cassie will break Al out of Hogwarts. What a terrible environment!

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Review #2, by Lobelia Sackville-Baggins You can break down a man, and build him back up again

10th April 2014:
I love you. You know that, right? I don't even think I can muster up the energy to write one of usual long, raving review...well, that and I have a very limited time frame to write this review in.
So, so happy to see that you updated! Love you forever!

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Review #3, by Rumbleroar13 You can break down a man, and build him back up again

10th April 2014:
Please update soon!! This story is so amazing!!

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Review #4, by whykay You can break down a man, and build him back up again

9th April 2014:
I like your style - you gave us a peek into the current state and starting from a year ago. I am trying hard to imagine how this will go down to that first chapter. Does she obliviate herself? Does something more happen between James and Cassie as well?

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Review #5, by Hope's Mom You can break down a man, and build him back up again

7th April 2014:
Wow - thing at Hogwarts are even worse than I could have imagined. I am relieved that Al and Cassie are at least together (so to speak) and getting along. I was worried that Al would be so angry at her inadvertent betrayal that he might ignore her. It is worrisome that he didn't know about Ginny. That will complicate their rescue. Thank you for sharing a new, intense chapter!

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Review #6, by rumbleroar13 You can break down a man, and build him back up again

6th April 2014:
So... I spent from 4pm to 5am reading every chapter of this story. It is so amazing. I haven't been so enthralled by a story since I read Clash by shenanigans (you should read that if you haven't). Please keep updating. I will dutifully check every hour ;)

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Review #7, by mikakaela You can break down a man, and build him back up again

6th April 2014:
I was super surprised to see you updated! It's been a while! I enjoyed this chapter. There was a lot of really interesting stuff going on. The unknown motives of Ginny and Buchanan most of all. Keep up the good work!

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Review #8, by free elf 25 You can break down a man, and build him back up again

4th April 2014:
So she's deep inside enemy camp now. How many chapters until it all goes down? Awesome update (as per usual) and another soonish? :)

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Review #9, by BlueElephant You can break down a man, and build him back up again

4th April 2014:
Ahhh i was so excited when i saw an update! This chapter was better than anything i'd imagined, I'm seriously intrigued as to how they're going to get out of there, and what happened to Ginny?! Can't wait for the next one :)

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Review #10, by Hedwig_forever She smouldered with a will to save the world

9th March 2014:
This story is literally my sole reason for checking HPFF it's so amazing...great to see it moving on to the next stage!!

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Review #11, by madness She smouldered with a will to save the world

23rd February 2014:
I couldn't love this story more.

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Review #12, by whykay She smouldered with a will to save the world

21st February 2014:
Update please! I can't wait!! The first chapter really befuddled me! eager to know how the story goes!

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Review #13, by PotterJAM97 She smouldered with a will to save the world

19th January 2014:
Thoughts of the Average Me, after reading this incredible story while I should be studying for AP U.S. History tests:

A)Ah! Too good! Too good! (Wipes tear)

B) YOU HAVE TO WRITE MORE! I want to know how they both feel about it, how they act, and why Cassie has lost her memories!

C), I don't like James. There's no competition between him and Al, mostly because Cassie and Al are super close and James and Cassie are barely civil to each other. Albus all the way (and I usually like James, so that's actually something.) felt like it was a bit too long in the forest with James, but that could be my biased dislike of the kid.

D.) YOU ARE INCREDIBLE. I loved the jumping off the cliff, perfect rush of adrenaline ending, and this was such a good chapter! This was also great as it sounded like a story, with a plot, versus a 21 rambling semi-humorous comedy like many fanfics. This is brilliant. Write more, you're incredibly talented!

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Review #14, by meowcowpow She smouldered with a will to save the world

13th December 2013:
Ahh! Poor Al! :( At least he's still breathing. But doesn't he realize after Cassie said the whole "follow my lead" phrase what kind of danger she was putting herself in for him? Please update soon! This story is pretty well written :)

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Review #15, by watermelon She smouldered with a will to save the world

9th December 2013:
YES!! an update! love love love this story. love Al, love James I just LOVE it. so happy you updated. Cant wait to se whats gonna happen next with cassie and Al, I feel bad for James tho I really would have liked to see his reaction when he realized she was gone. great chaper, update soon!

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Review #16, by Lobellia Sackville-Baggins She smouldered with a will to save the world

8th December 2013:
You did it! You updated! Sweet mother of monkey milk, she updated! Oh, glorious day! Thank you, thank you, thankyouthankyouthankyouthankyou!

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Review #17, by Giggles She smouldered with a will to save the world

7th December 2013:
His reaction was so perfect. But I really really hope Cassie was wrong about Al not forgiving her. I think I will seriously cry if they don't end up together.
This scenario kind of reminds me of the Hunger Games, even though the premise of the story is on the Uglies.
Good job!!! Can't wait to read the next part

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Review #18, by sunshine daisies She smouldered with a will to save the world

3rd December 2013:
AH AL!!! I just love him sooo much. He reacted exactly as I thought he was goin to Ugh I cant wait to see what happens next! but I definitely miss James I hope he comes back soon! update as soon as possible :)

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Review #19, by Hope's Mom She smouldered with a will to save the world

30th November 2013:
Ouch -poor Al and Cassie! This is not the first kiss of anyone's dreams. I am impresses that she survived the apparation in such good shape. I can't wait to see what she encounters next and how she gets Al and Ginny out of Hogwarts. Thank you so much for such a great update!

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Review #20, by TheWizardingPorcupine She smouldered with a will to save the world

30th November 2013:
This is such a great and intense story! I really love the idea that even after the Second Wizarding War everything still isn't perfect.
But you really have some other great stories you've been neglecting, like Annie. In my opinion, you should really update those too, as they are too good to be abandoned.
You are an amazing writer, please update ANY of your stories soon!

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Review #21, by navyfail She smouldered with a will to save the world

29th November 2013:
And Al is back! Those last scenes were cute and the ending of this chapter was unexpected and adorable and leaves me wondering if he will or will not forgive her.

And omg he kissed her even if he may have not really meant it.

I do miss James though and I hope you update soon!!


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Review #22, by Sarah She smouldered with a will to save the world

29th November 2013:
Wow ! such a beautiful chapter ! It really shoked me at the end !

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Review #23, by Jcb You can be anything you want

12th November 2013:
I just started reading this story today and I just have to say that
it's absolutely incredible. Your such a great author, you could
turn this story into multiple books and it would be just as

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Review #24, by Sammi You can be anything you want

3rd November 2013:
Ugh wow I actually cried a little reading this last chapter. But it was in the best of ways;)
This book does strongly remind me of Uglies but I adore this so much more than the actual story. It's just so amazing. Cassie is far from perfect (I wanted to kill her for keeping the locket a secret for so long) but at the same time I just love her.
And omg the FEELZ when Ginny and Al were gone. AHHH!! Harry was so heartbreaking after that. And I unabashedly support Cassie/Al with my whole heart I just flail so much it's not even healthy. I'm still not very fond of him I'm afraid. I only like him when he is with Ryan, his little brother.
I'm sorry this review is not very coherent at all you're just so amazing I can't. Please update this!! I'll be checking!
Off I go to stalk your author's page! *skips away*

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Review #25, by Your New Fangirl You can be anything you want

1st November 2013:
Hey there :)

I just wanted to tell you that I started your story yesterday and couldn't stop reading it!
Fell in love with it right at the start!

I like your version of the Wizarding World where Harry is not the hero bt a victim of politics.

Though I did not understand why they did not apparate to some town and Cassie tried to contact Dole. Or she could have just done some wandmagic, I'm sure they would have found her and then brought her to Hogwarts.

But then again she wouldn't have spent with James.

I must say, I can not decide which brother I'd ship with Cassie.

The "best-friend-turns-into-love-of-live" or the "forbidden love". Hearts will be broken, that's for sure. I feel sorry for them. It must suck when brothers fall in love with the same girl.

I must say this really reminds me of the movie "East of Eden" with James Dean.

I just hope this story gets a happy end!

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