You know, it IS a strange concept, death. I'm a lot like you. I will go on for hours with "whats out there" and "life after death"...Author's Response: I think the phrase I like to use is "mind boggling". :D Going on for hours about it really puts my head in a spin... I won't try it now!
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Hmm, nice idea! I think it might be better if it just ended with Remus saying "We're dead" instead of that last bit about Tonks realizing it.Author's Response: Thank you for the review and suggestion. :) I'll read this story through again because it was ages ago that I wrote it, and then probably edit it. *she says* :D
Bit of a typo at the end, u should fix that real quick...ah man, i feel real bad for Tonks. She didn't even loose her son...well, depends on how u look at it. wow, u r really good at making those endings questionable. i'll be thinkin about that for a bit.
10~10Author's Response: Yeah this was a bit of a random one-shot that just came out late one night!
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I really did like it, I think that Remus would have felt like that about death. I suppose I always figured that death would be a relief to him in some ways.
This was beautiful, Remus' feelings about where he was and his wife were so nice.
Really good, nice and but short, and just a great little read. Very sensitive to the characters emotions.
=] spam_up_samAuthor's Response: Thank you! I always thought that death may have been a relief to Remus, until his son was born. But I think he would've been more open to it than Tonks, who was obviously younger and seemed far more innocent that Remus.
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i liked it!! i wasnt sure where you were going at first but i like that and i like the way things flow.Author's Response: Lol this is a very strange little story... well it's not even a story! More like a paragraph! :D
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